雅思写作开头10大误区
很多雅思考生都存在雅思写作问题，而开头的写作是最主要的错误之一，有的考生开头过分啰嗦，有的考生中式英语痕迹太浓，甚至还有一些考生如偏离轨道无轨电车一样侃侃而谈，不明所以，语法词汇错误一大堆，实在不忍直视。小编整理了十大错误的写作开头，希望能够对考生的复习有所帮助，大家在平时的复习备考中一定不能再犯这些错误。
雅思写作开头10大误区 来看看你是否躺枪
“见官死”开头之一：过分啰嗦型(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题
In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.
Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
“见官死”开头之二：中式英文人见人晕(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.
“见官死”开头之三：观点模糊态度暧昧 (喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
“见官死”开头之四：偏离主题无轨电车(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：
Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
“见官死”开头之五：语法错误惨不忍睹 (喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：
Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?(雅思真题)
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.
“见官死”开头之六：过分简单没有重点(喷血指数：☆☆)
典型失败案例：
Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
“见官死”开头之七：用词不当 表达不准(喷血指数：☆☆)
典型失败案例：
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
“见官死”开头之八：意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：
Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
“见官死”开头之九：中国俗语胡乱翻译(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children
Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……
Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?
Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.
“见官死”开头之十： 观点武断态度强硬(喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：
Topic1-The importance of confidence
In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem
I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.
雅思写作词汇量不足如何入手
通过对雅思写作了解官方范文，不难发现，雅思写作是围绕教育、社会、环境等大众话题展开的。在语言表达方面，更多强调用词的准确和多变，而不是考查用词的专业和难度，因此考生在备考的时候，可以按照相关话题进行词汇的梳理，既可以是别人已经整理好的，也可以是自己从阅读各类话题范文中摘录出来的。这些词汇跟雅思写作紧密相关，有话题语境为背景，又加以合理归类，所以遗忘率会较低而利用率则较高。而对于话题中的少数专业词汇，建议视时间和能力，量力而行，可以明确，没有专业词汇，雅思写作照样可以拿七分。
另一方面，雅思写作和其他考场作文一样，受考查形式的制约，其评判本身是存在一定局限性的。换句话说，考官并不了解考生真实的写作能力，或者具体到词汇量的大小，他只能根据这几百个单词的文章来进行判断，所以从应试的角度来说，词汇量相对有限的考生只要使文章中词汇“显得比较丰富”就可以了。想要做到这点，推荐给考生以下两个方法：
第一、同义转换
设想碰到一个懂中文的外国人，他在和你交谈的过程中涉及到钱的话题，他不光会说中文的人民币、钞票，还会说大团结、老人头，甚至连孔方兄都知道，你会觉得他的中文词汇量小么?同样的，一篇雅思作文中，如果你在表达“重要”这个出现频率极高的意思的时候，除了important以外，还可以把crucial,critical,vital,indispensable等词信手拈来的话，有什么理由让考官觉得你的词汇量不足呢，当然，或许你也就只积累了几个写作中高频出现的词汇而已，但效果已经达到了，不是么?
第二、词汇活用
雅思写作评分标准中，对于词汇的适当应用有一定的分数标准。阅读一些雅思官方范文，可以看到，很多词不难，但是用得很恰当，自己以前没有这样用过，这就是范文的高明之处了。词汇量一方面是指认知词汇的广度，但另一方面就是掌握词汇的深度了。很多词汇，我们认识，但不一定完全会用，比如benefit这个词，它既可以做名词，表示利益，好处，也可以做动词，及物时表示使……受益，不及物时表示从……中受益，还可以衍生出beneficial有益处的和beneficiary受益人。因此如果要表达某事物带来好处这个意思，光用benefit这个词的不同用法，就可以有五种以上的表达方式，更不用提句型的变化和同义词的替换了。况且，把已经认知的词进行用法上的拓展，远比记忆一个新词要省时省力，而需要做的仅仅只是平时碰到的时候，记上一笔。
