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如何帮助穷人英语作文(2)

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  帮助穷人英语作文篇4

  a plan of help

  Helping other is a meaningful action and beneficial to all.Help the other just like lifting a finger.You can help the other in addition to have a good reputation.The Bible said “It is more blessed to give than to receive.” Its shows that when you are helping the other,you are helping yourself as the same time.Helping others can satisfy the spirit and clean your soul.Although helping people don’t expect returns,the other will help you when you need a help because of your helpful.So,helping others can make you have a better social life.

  帮助穷人英语作文篇5

  Most people who are homeless have menatl health problems or dual diagnosis alcohol and mental health problems. Neither of these can be their own fault. If you have ever tried to sleep through a night on a park bench you would wonder how anybody did it in the depths of winter.

  The Medical Model has nothing to give to people with any mental health problems except containment - knock out

  drugs very similar in effect to alcohol.

  Socieyt has no cure for its most vulnerable people.

  Psychiatric institutions will not work with anybody who has an alcohol problem and the alcohol agencies have no way to help unless the person has enough will to help themselves - so they are pushed away from services to spend their lives begging for enough alcohol to commit slow suicide.

  It happens in front of our noses and disgust makes the barrier.

  We cannot help them so we hate them.

  Many young people are on the street because their housing got closed down and they get into a downward spiral of not being able to get a job without an address and not being able to get the money for a deposit for an address. Many young people run away from abuse at home and get sucked into prostitution.

  We as a society fail so many people with our instant disgust without hearing the story and without understanding that we are failing them. Alcoholism and abuse is everyones issue not just the victims - it disgraces us all.

  帮助穷人英语作文篇6

  Everytime i see poverty life when i turn over the book.i always feel unwell. Believing everybody have the seem fells.so,meybe we will think what we can do for the poor.that being so,mang people make a choice to be volunteers.It is cheering.

  One day,i wached a poor child in newspapers.His sight like a knife sharped painmy heart.i have never forgoten that.idesperated do something for him.so,i thought of being a high-degree doctor to help him,but a friend of mine said that the higher achieviment the less the heart of compassion.i think it carefully,that word,is right and many people will be dusted the eyes by benefits.

  Sometimes i can not helpasking myself why you not do something for the poor,what you do something for the poor.But i really do not know.who can help me,WHO CAN HELP THE POOR.

  Every time i see poverty life when i turn over the book.i always feel unwell(根据作者的意思这句话最好改为Every time I see the life of the poor from books, I always feel unhappy.) Believing everybody have the seem fells(I believe everybody has the same feeling).so,meybe(maybe) we will think what we can do for the poor.that being so(改为so),mang(many) people make a choice to be volunteers.It is cheering.

  One day,i wached(watched) a poor child in newspapers.His sight (加is)like a knife sharped pain(sharpening)my heart.i have never forgoten(forgotten) that.i desperated(decided to) do something for him.so,i thought of being a high-degree doctor to help him,but a friend of mine said that the higher achieviment the less the heart of compassion.i think it (over)carefully,(and)that word,is right and many people will be dusted the eyes(改用seduced) by benefits.

  Sometimes i can not help asking myself why you (加do) not do something for the poor,what you do something (去掉something)for the poor.But i really do not know.who can help me,WHO CAN HELP THE POOR.

  评语

  作者表达对穷人的关心和担心,总体意思写的很好,句子的高度不错,只是开头的几句表的混乱,总的来说写的不错,建议以后注意检查,最好在WORD上写,这样基本的错误可以检查出来。


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