2020年1月11日托福综合写作机经真题回忆与范文解析
1月11日的托福考试结束后，关于托福综合写作部分的机经，大家也比较关心。毕竟这部分真题题目的练习，对于大家接下来的备考有很大的影响。具体的本次考试题目以及对应的答题思路、满分范文到底是什么呢?下面小编为大家整理了详细的内容，供大家参考!
2020年1月11日托福综合写作机经真题回忆与范文解析
话题分类
生命科学类
考题回忆
1-总论点
三种阻止蝙蝠受到wind turbines伤害的方法。
2-阅读部分
论点1：不把wind turbines建在蝙蝠活动的地方
论点2：wind turbines晚上不运行
论点3：制造蝙蝠不喜欢的雷达不让蝙蝠靠近
3-听力部分
反驳1：蝙蝠活动的地方就不能得到足够的energy
反驳2：蝙蝠可能会再wind turbines上休息，早上开启是也会伤寒蝙蝠
反驳3：雷达会影响蝙蝠的繁殖系统
解题思路
此题是典型的听力反驳阅读的题型。文章中需要表明听力完全反驳阅读，并写清听力中出现的细节即可。
参考范文
The reading passage explores the issue that there are three ways to prevent bats from being harmed by wind turbines. The professor in the lecture, however, opposes those methods by providing three specific points.
First, the reading passage suggests that wind turbines can be constructed in the area where bats seldom live or forage, so that the harm caused by wind turbines can be decreased. Although the professor in the lecture admits that the first method is beneficial to bats, the area with frequent appearance of bats can not be powered by the wind turbines, which is inconvenient to people living in the same area. Therefore, the professor's argument disproves its counterpart in the reading.
Moreover, the writer states that we can turn off the wind turbines to avoid the harm towards bats. However, the professor contends that bats still can be hurt by the turbines in the morning, because if the turbines are turned off, bats tent to take a rest on the them.
Finally, the writer asserts that wind turbines can be facilitated radar which emits special range of sound waves to irritate bats, in which keeps bats away from those turbines. By contrast, the professor provides that the certain sound waves are bad for bats’ reproductive systems, so that the third method can cause more damage to bats species.
托福独立写作中的常用句型总结
一、提出背景的句式
It’s generally agreed that ... ... (人们普遍认为... ...)
There is a growing body of opinion that ... ... (越来越多的人认为... ...)
An increasing number of people have the tendency to believe that ... ... (越来越多的人倾向于认为... ...)
Some people, especially the old, believe that ... ... (一些人，尤其是老人，认为... ...)
Other people, the young in particular, argue that ... ... (别的人，尤其是年轻人，认为... ...)
Some current analyses conclude that ... ... (当下的一些分析表明... ...)
... ... is a heated topic in our times. (... ...是我们这个时代火热的一个话题)
The topic about ... ... has been raging for decades. (关于... ...的话题已经风行几十年了)
... ... is an eternal/a perpetual topic in our daily lives. (... ...是我们日常生活中一个永恒的话题)
... ... is one of the most talked about topics in the contemporary society. (... ...是当代社会讨论最多的话题之一)
Recently, the impact that ... ... has had on our daily lives, in general, is huge and undeniable. (近年来， ... ...对我们日常生活的影响，总的来说，是巨大且不可避免的)
With the gradual perfection and progressive amelioration of ... ..., sweeping changes have been brought into our lives. (随着... ...的不断完善和进一步提高，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化)
In terms of ... ..., sometimes we find ourselves in dilemmas. (谈到... ...时，我们有时候会发现自己左右为难)
二、个人观点的句式
I am totally convinced that ... ... (我百分百确信... ...)
I personally tend to believe that ... ... (我个人倾向于认为... ...)
From my perspective, ... ... is without doubt a better option. (依我看，... ...毫无疑问是个更好的选择)
According to the evidence offered above, I can hardly agree that ... ... (综合以上证明，我很难同意... ...)
With respect to ... ..., I am pretty sure that I’m on the same/opposite side of it. (关于... ...，我很确定是站在正/反方的立场)
Although it’s no simple task for us to make a prudent and satisfying choice, I still wholeheartedly believe that ... ... (尽管对于我们来说，做一个谨慎友令人满意的选择是很困难的，但是我仍然全心全意地相信... ...)
三、引出争议的句式
There is no consensus on whether...yet. (关于是否该... ...，现在仍然没有一个定论)
Whether...is an issue open to debate. (是否该... ...，这是一个有待讨论的问题)
Whether...is a boon or bane is still open to debate. (... ...是好是坏/是对是错，这有待讨论)
The issue of whether…has triggered intense debate. (是否该... ...，这个问题引发了一个激烈的讨论)
The debate over whether...has been going on for a long time. (关于... ...的讨论已经持续很长时间了)
When it comes to ... ..., people tend to hold different viewpoints. (当谈到... ...的时候，人们倾向于持有不同的观点)
Most of the public tend to advocate that ... ... ,while I doubt whether the argument needs more analyses. (大多数人倾向于主张... ..., 但是我认为这有待进一步讨论)
托福写作备考之如何减少扣分点
托福写作作为输出型的考试形式，一直是考生最难得分的部分，考生总是感觉无话可说，无从下笔。本文通过托福作文清晰的结构安排和自查两方面，帮你有效的降低托福写作的扣分点，赶紧来看看吧!
大家都知道，在托福考试中，写作是一种偏主观输出的考试形式，与客观题相比，想要提高这部分的分数，我们除了平时认真备考，不断扩展思路和积累表达之外，在考试过程中还要尽量避免不必要的失分。其实很多同学都问过这样的问题：老师，我现在句子表达能力基本就是这个样子了，马上要考试，考试中有没有需要注意的细节，在我现有的水平上，尽量让自己的文章得分更高一点呢?其实是有的，那今天我们就分享一下如何在托福写作中减少扣分点，赶快来看看吧!
建立清晰的框架
写作不仅考查语言的表达，还考查思路的表达，新托福评分标准中就有这样一项：well organized and well developed。所以在写作中，给考官展现自己清楚的文章思路是很重要的，不管内容表达如何，我们首先要做到的就是框架清晰。
区分段落是最简单直接的方法。看到这里，可能有人会觉得好笑，但是真的是有学生考试一着急，加上时间紧，就忘记了分段，所以我们这里还要再强调一下。一般，综合写作建议分为四个自然段：第一段总述听力和阅读中的观点，后面三个自然段分点具体阐述(一个论点一个自然段，一般综合写作都会给出三方面的具体内容)。不建议只分两个自然段：一段总述，一段分析。因为分析部分还是需要清楚地告诉阅卷人，文章和听力总共表述了几层意思。如果都写在一些，容易给阅卷人造成漏点的假象。独立写作建议分为五个自然段：第一段引出论题，阐述自己的观点，中间三个自然段分三个方面阐述自己的理由，最后一个自然段进行总结。(如果只想到了两点原因，也可以写四个自然段，但是需要达到字数要求)
每一自然段的内容阐述建议按照以下顺序表达：主要观点 —— 具体阐述 —— 举例说明。我们在表达英文时，一定要记住，写每一个自然段的时候，都要首先提出主要观点。因为中英文表达逻辑不一样，中文习惯铺垫，我们写中文文章时，很喜欢在前面铺垫抒情，写了半天还不见主要观点，这是一种意境。但是在外国人的思想中，他们更喜欢直截了当的表达，所以每段第一句话，先把观点给他们，接下去再进行具体的阐述，这样阅卷人就会比较清楚地 get 到你想要表达的意思了。
写完文章要自查
在考试的过程中，文章写完之后还需要留出 2-3 分钟的时间进行自查，这一步也很重要的。因为是机考，我们需要把内容敲在屏幕上，所以在写作过程中，就避免不了会出现一些比较低级的错误，比如拼写，如果错误较多，就算文章写得不错，也会影响到阅卷人的心情，自然，分数也就达不到预期的效果。总的来看，大家经常会出现以下几种错误，我们总结一下，以便大家自查。
拼写错误
在考试中，考生会遇到两种情况：一种是打字的误打，另一种是对单词本身 记忆的错误，因此不仅需要考生在平时的备考过程中多多进行上机练习，熟悉用键盘打字，还要求考生在平时注意背单词的精确性。
时态错误
托福写作除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态之外，一般使用现在时态，所以大家在检查的时候需要注意时态的运用，千万不能各种时态混用。
词性错误
英文中，每种词性都有具体的用法，最常见的词性错误是形容词和副词的混用，检查时需要重点关注一下。
句子表达是否完整
受中文影响，很多同学在英语写作中经常会出现一些表达不完整或者特别中式的句子。在写英语句子时，我们一定要遵循五大句型的句子结构，然后再将修饰成分填充进去，切记简单粗暴的词词对应。另外这里还需要强调一点，考生不能为了追求句子表达所谓的“高大上”去乱用句子，正所谓用错还不如不用。
托福写作范文：探索太空是否是资源浪费
独立写作题目
Independent Writing:
It is a waste of time to spend funds on space travel or space exploration.
Nowadays, an increasing number of citizens are discussing the recent launch of ShenZhou carrier rocket. While there are some people who claim that this kind of launch is a waste of money or time because it could not bring any benefits for citizens, I hold a different opinion. From my perspective, space exploration is necessary.
Admittedly, space travel or space exploration would waste a large sum of money. By spending much money on doing research regarding outer space life, government loses their focus on civil life where many people are suffering from starvation, air pollution and epidemics. Under this circumstance, there is no doubt that people would complain about government’s aloft behaviors. However,if viewing from a different angle, space exploration is a long time investment. Never should we expect the journey would bring immediate economic returns to the country. In this case, space travel and space exploration is quite helpful for the country.
To begin with, space exploration might bring benefits for us to search for new energy resource. That is to say, other planets may be rich in certain kinds of resources that are in great shortage on the earth. According to the report released after the exploration to the Mars, the officials from NASA confirms that Mars contains a great volume of natural gas and iron. Moreover, engineers have also noticed that these resources on the planet are able to explore, and if they could solve the problem of long time transportation, these resources could be used on the earth. Consequently, the use of natural gas will not consume burning of petroleum and make our planet a better place to live in.
In addition, space exploration aims to improve level of technology. In other words, it is the development of advanced technology that makes it possible to explore the outer space. It is usually the case that without the technology of launching satellite into the space, it is impossible for people to conduct research. As a result, scientists have to improved their knowledge in related areas so that they could guarantee the launch of these rockets, as well as satellites. Meanwhile, to ensure astronauts’ safety in the outer space, scientists have to repeated work on their suits in order to keep astronauts away from radioactivity. Also, to fill with enough oxygen, scientists have to run encapsulation tests again and again. Only if these equipment are guaranteed can astronauts be safely working in the outer space.
To sum up, the seemly useless space exploration would cost a large sum of money; however, this space activity could still bring benefits in both new energy searching and technology improvement.
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