全面汇总雅思写作考生常犯4大错误

　　雅思写作有小作文和大作文两部分租场，两部分的时间合计为60分钟。由于大作文所占的分数比重是小作文的两倍，同时该部分A类与G类考题内容以及问题形式趋于一致，也是中国考生错误比较密集的部分，所以接下来的内容将围绕着大作文部分展开。下面我们就来看看在大作文中，考生常会犯的错。

　　全面汇总雅思写作考生常犯4大错误

　　雅思写作考生常犯错误

　　一、语言绝对化

　　根据能量守恒定律(Law of energy conservation)，即“各种能量形式互相转换是有方向和条件限制的，能量相互转换时其量值不变，表明能量不能被创造或消灭”，人们在使用语言描述事物变化时，应尽可能避免语言过于绝对化，尤其是在使用第二语言进行正式的书面表述时，更应该注意该语言中非绝对化表达方式的学习，这样才能尽显文章内容的客观性。

　　二、只回答部分问题

　　An increasing number of people are moving and living in big cities. Why is this case? Is it a positive or negative trend? (2010年1月23日 G类) 该题有两个问题，很多考生在作答时忽视了第一问，只回答第二问，抑或是把第一问和该现象积极的一面混为一谈，如：

　　On the one hand, living in big cities brings about a considerable number of advantages, which is also why people move to big cities. Initially, it is undeniable that work conditions in big cities are usually better that those in countries and small cities. With more work opportunities and a higher level of salary, people in other places, especially the young, are inclined to move to big cities. Subsequently, not only does living in big cities offer people better work conditions, but also it affords dwellers with facilities of higher quality. These facilities, such as the premium hospitals and education resources, are extremely attractive to countryside people and those in small cities. (考生答卷)

　　三、跑题、偏题严重

　　如Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4月30日A类)

　　就该题而言，很多考生将意思是“收费”的charged一词理解为“控制”，而该词是我们在中学阶段就已经学习过的。这就很容易导致作文跑题，而跑题的作文分数为5分。

　　四、文章没有分段

　　产生该问题的原因主要有：1. 观点数量少;2. 不知道观点如何展开;3. 写作速度太慢。那么，要在规定时间内满足字数要求，考生需要想出足够多的观点，学习如何展开观点，熟练运用复杂句并提高写作速度。接下来我们将分析如何满足以上要求：

　　以上就是小编总结的雅思写作考生常犯错误，大家看后看看自己还有哪些方面不足，并及时改正。

　　妙用定语从句帮雅思写作加分

　　怎样写出优美句子——which的巧用(如何延长句子，无限续命，写出优美的长难句)

　　翻译练习：平等的教育能帮助解决学生学习成绩不好

　　l Equal access to education can help tackle educational underachievement

　　l Equal access to education which can help tackle educational underachievement should be carried out(联想到被谁)

　　l Equal access to education which can help tackle educational underachievement should be carried out by local authorities(联想到可否为主语)

　　l Local authorities should ensure equal access to education, which can help tackle educational underachievement, a problem found among disadvantaged children. (最后再做补充)

　　which的巧用:还可以和不同的介词搭配，呈现更灵活丰富的表达

　　翻译练习：政府的职能包括扩大基础建设和创造更多就业以便于人们能够更幸福的生活

　　l The government function includes expanding the infrastructure and creating more job opportunities, with which people will be able to live a joyful life

　　l An optimized education system is destined to generate numerous ambitious minors, among which, the elites of our time will also be found

　　一个优化的教育体制注定会输出无数的有志青年，而在他们当中就蕴藏着我们这个时代的精英

　　美文中的宾语从句妙用

　　When the Indonesian Tsunami occurred, nobody was psychologically prepared for the upcoming disaster which eventually wiped out the entire shore and even the whole city.

　　例子的描述短小精悍，采用WHICH引导的宾语从句，配合小词wipe out的使用，让整个例子变得很形象生动

　　Although it’s unfair to lower the qualification for them, some counter-measures should be taken for the sake of a better pre-college learning which could enable them to compete with the urban students in the same platform.

　　让步语气+宾语从句的搭配，注意which指代的是better pre-college learning

　　The feeling and experience you acquired from the real places is visual and genuine, which will definitely give you a precious memory.

　　一句简单的宾语从句，但是从语义和逻辑上都很精炼

　　There is no denying that the creative artists could work as a lubrication when the social disputes and frictions occurred by entertaining people in an artistic and innovative manner, which, to some extent, will also start a new fashion trend or deliver breakthroughs to the realm of art.

　　经久不衰的“逗号战术”+好朋友“宾语从句”，无限续命