初中优秀英语作文
June 23rd Sunday Sunny
It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, He Song. The animals were so interesting that all the people loved them. When a bear asked for some food by waving its ann, a visitor threw something to it. At once I went up to him and said without thinking, "Don't do that. It's bad for it. If you really love them, take good care of them." His face turned red and answered he wouldn't do that again.
6月23日 星期日 睛
今天是个风和日丽的好天，我和同学贺松去了北京动物园。动物们是那么可爱，大家都非常喜欢它们。一只熊挥动着胳膊向人们要吃的，一个游客就投进去了什么东西。我想都没想就走过去说：“不要那样做。你的做法对它们没好处。如果真的喜欢它们，就应该爱护它们。”他的脸红了，并且回答说他不会再那么做了。
June 23rd Sunday Sunny
It was very fine today. It was neither too hot nor too cold. He Song and I went to Beijing Zoo in the morning. The animals were so interesting that everyone liked them very much.
We watched the bears for a long time. They were really lovely. One of them was standing and opening the mouth. Another of them was sitting on the ground and waving its arm like saying hello to us. The other two guys were boxing. We had a good laugh at it. But at that time I saw a visitor throwing food to them. I ran up to him and stopped him, because some of the animals had been hurt by the food given by visitors.
All the animals are our friends. Take good care of them if we really love them.
6月23日 星期日 晴
今天天气非常好，既不冷也不热。贺松和我去了北京动物园。动物们是那么可爱，大家都非常喜欢它们。
我们看了很长时间熊，它们太可爱了。其中一只站起采，张着大嘴;另一只正坐在地上挥动着它的胳膊，好像在对我们说你好。那边有两只正在练拳击，这让我们笑了个够。但是，那时我看见一个游客朝那些熊投喂食物，我马上跑过去制止他。因为以前就有一些动物被游客投喂的东西伤害过。
所有的动物都是我们的朋友，如果我们真正喜欢它们，就请好好保护它们。
初中英语作文常用经典句型——结尾
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that...
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop...
3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to...
4) In conclusion, it is imperative that...
5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.
6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must...
7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...
10) Taking all these into account, we...
11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
[英语写作]10字原则教你搞定初中英语作文
初中英语写作很简单 10字原则教你写出“一等文”——学而思中学部老师王允泽
初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。
问：“哪十字?”
允泽老师答：“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点!”
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!
要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful, good-looking, B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定!
中考英语作文范文7篇
中考英语作文范文：1.How to make friends
It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests.
Don’t be afraid to show people what you are really good at. Talk about the things you like and do best.
Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them.
Be a good listner. Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself.
Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed. That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends.
中考英语作文范文：2.My view on television
Television has come into our life for many years.
We can’t live happily without television. It can give us the latest information and news. It can open up our eyes and enlarge our knowledge. We can get happiness from the plays on television. We’ll be boring all day if there is no television. Television programs are attractive. After a whole day’s hard worlk we can sit before the television and drink a cup of tea. How wonderful it is!
Television is also bad for people’s health. It’s bad for you to watch TV too long, especially bad for your eyes.
It is true that watching TV can influence our behavior. However, it depends on what we do.www.rr365.com
中考英语作文范文：3.My view on school uniform
At our school , we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes. Our teachers believe that if we did that. We would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. We disagree. We should feel more comfortable and thate is good for studying. If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. We also think everyone should be different from others. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
中考英语作文范文：4. My opinions on volunteering
We are middle school students and we are busy with our lessons. So some people think we should concentrate more on our studies. If we volunteer to help others, it’s a waste of time. But I think volunteering is great. I not only feel good about helping others but also get to spend time doing what I love to do. And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class. So if I have an oppoutunity, I’d like to visit old people’s home to clean up for them. I’d also like to help sick kids in hospital. I love kids and I plan to put my love to good use by working in hospital. In a word, I’d like to help people who need help. If everyone helps out a bit, the world will be more colorful.
中考英语作文范文：5.Small kinds
Human beings are advanced animals in the world. Some animals are very kind. For example , if you are kind to a dog , it will shake. It will tail to you. So if you are kind to others, they will also be kind to you.
You have lots of chances to give your small kindness if you see a disabled person working in the street. You can help him to cross the street. If you meet a stranger, you can show him the way. If he or she asks you questions, you should be kind to answer them. That is you give small kindness to others. Maybe it seems to you a piece of cake, but it is very important to people in need. If you do this, the others will do it to you.
Be kind to others, and they will be kind to you.
中考英语作文范文：6.My opinion on Internet
Hello, everyone! As you know, many students like to work on the Internet. Of course, it can bring us many good things. We can learn more knowledge outside our books, practice our spoken English with someone else and look up some useful information.
At the same time, it can bring us some bad things as well. Some students have made too many friends, seen some bad information that is not good for us and spent too much time on it. We should know what to do and what not to do.
That’s my idea. Thank you for listening!
中考英语作文范文：7.Internet shopping
Internet shopping is a new way of shopping. It offers a lot of advantages. The most important one is convenience. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. And you don’t have to queue with others. And it is often cheaper to buy goods through the Internet and it is also easy to find what you are looking for.
There are some disadvantages, too. You can not see the products or check their qualities. Besides you can not enjoy walking around the shops and talking with your friends.
中考英语作文范文赏析：突发事件
一、突发事件问题(热点)】
突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型HINI流感病例(A/HINI flu cases)，都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要
典型例句：
1. one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数
One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.
2. It"s our duty to do sth
It’s our duty to help them.
3. As…as possible
We should help them as much as possible.
4. here be……
Here are lots of things we can do.
5. We should keep calm instead of being afraid.我们要保持冷静而不能害怕。
6. make +sb+ 形容词
It makes many people homeless.
7. too … to= so … that
They are too young to look after themselves
例文：
1、汶川大地震(黑龙江鸡西)
5月12日，四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。
要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80—100字左右;
词汇参考：地震earthquake，悲痛sorrow，受到感动be deeply moved，安慰comfort，重建rebuild，自愿做某事volunteer to do sth
参考范文：
On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow. A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.
I’m deeply moved by these people. So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.
2、雪灾
去年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想?有何打算?能不能改变这种状态?
As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldn"t go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of now ledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
3.甲型HINI流感
从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感(A/HINI flu)，部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。
要点：
一。询问
1.他的健康状况;
2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例(A/HINI flu cases);
3.他们是否还上学。
二。建议
1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方;
2.勤洗手;讲卫生
3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜;
4.多吃水果蔬菜。
Dear Mike,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I’m so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?
To stay away from the disease, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you’ll be OK.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
4、(四川南充)
“5.12”汶川大地震后，某校将开展“人人为灾区孩子献爱心”的主题班会活动，现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：1.许多孩子地震后不能上学 2.。没有足够的学习用品和衣物 3.每个孩子都应该有上学的权利 4.我们应该作一些力所能及的事情去帮助、他们，比如…… 5.希望他们能尽快重返校园……
注意：1.可根据要点，适当发挥，(参考词汇：school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can)
2.词数：70词左右
参考作文：
Dear students，
After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless. Their schools and houses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They don’t have enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.
Students’ Union
中考英语作文范文赏析：健康问题
【二、健康问题(热点)】
健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。
典型例句：
1. It is very important to keep healthy。
2. How can we keep healthy?
3. We can"t go to sleep too late. We can"t get up too late。
4. We should eat the food healthily。
5. We should do more exercise。
6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。
7. I didn"t feel like eating anything。
8. I decided to see the doctor。
9. In the doctor"s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。
10. He said :"Nothing serious." And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。
11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful。
12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。
13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
例文：
1、根据图示，简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康，并展开想象，适当发挥。要求：词数80左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考答案：
All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
2、卫生健康饮食：健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会，请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法，写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。
(1)保持健康的重要性
(2)保持健康的方法
(3)保持健康的结论
(4) (你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体; 3.鄙弃不良习惯
范文1:
Dear boys and girls :
Here is my advice about how to keep health / fit.
As a middle school student , first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子)。 Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Don’t eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit. Third you need enough sleep or rest. Next keep yourself happy. As people often say smiling makes younger. Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health.
That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. Thank you, bye!
范文2:
Dear boys and girls:
I’m talking about how to keep health/fit. Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise, eat more junk food, and they usually do not have enough time to sleep. If we wish to keep fit, my advices are as follow:
Firstly, we must keep taking exercises every day , and eat lots of fruit and vegetables . Secondly, try to sleep for about 8 hours a night, and remember to “early to bed early to rise”。 Finally, stay away from cigarettes / smoking / drugs毒品。 Besides(除此之外)， don’t forget to breathe (呼吸)the fresh air in the open air .Keep happy every day.
That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.
3、根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。(字数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用)
有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。
参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
范文：
We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something which they like to eat. But I’m afraid that it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside the school, because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.
In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.
中考英语作文范文赏析：关于环境保护
【三、关于环境保护问题(热点)】
环境保护问题是中考热门话题，出现频率高，难度较大，必须掌握。
典型句子：
1. It’s our duty to save water
2. As we know , water is very important to man,
3. we can’t live without water.
4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.
5. But some people don’t care about it .
6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.
Something must be done to stop the pollution.
7. It"s our duty to protect our environment。
8. It is very important to take care of our environment
9. We should not throw litter onto the ground
10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees
11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
14.Trees are very helpful and important for us.
15.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.
It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
例文：
1、假如你是新华中学的学生，名叫MIKE。去年6月1日我国已经禁止使用塑料袋，你对此有何看法和什么好的建议?
参考答案：
I’m Mike. I am a student in Huaxing Middle School. Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I don’t like them. I think they use the wasting valuable oil their production. And they can’t decompose(分解) in a short time. The plastic bags will make our world worse. I agree with the rule, which people can’t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets. It’s good for our environment.
So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment. Let’s make our world more and more beautiful.
2 、6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日， 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重……假如你是学生Jone，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛。
要求：1、举例说明环境存在的问题1—3方面;2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例1—3方面进行说明，字数80左右。
参考答案：
Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:
I’m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I’m a bit(=a little) nervous as I’ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.
As we all know, the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse. In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do? How to protect our environmemt? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping basskets not plastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write . In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment , there will be less pollution and our lives will be better.
“There is only one earth”，I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!
3、(江苏南通)目前南通市正在积极创建全国文明城市，中学生也在为之努力。假如你是你是某中学的一名学生张通，请根据下列图表所示内容，给笔友John写一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况。
注意：1.邮件内容应包含所有要点，不要简单翻译，可适当发挥;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数90左右(邮件中已经写好了的部分，不计入总词数)。
4.参考词汇：civilized 文明的 respect 尊敬
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our city. Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city. We middle school students are also doing something for it.
中考英语作文范文赏析：语言学习
【四、语言学习 (热点)】
这是中考中的老话题，近几年常考，形式多样。
典型例句：
1. My favorite subject is English。
2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。
3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。
4. China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China. English becomes more and more useful.
5. So English is very important and I like English very much。
6. We have a lot of fun in the English class.
7. Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。
8. I hope I can go abroad(出国) one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。
9. I like English and try my best to learn it。
例文：
(浙江丽水)Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。
提示：
When did you start learning English? (in … /…years ago)
How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)
What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…)
What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs…)
参考作文：
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning(在最开始的时候)， listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it(有志者事竟成)。
2、(四川资阳)假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国参观奥运会而报名参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据下列提示和你学习英语的体会给Linda写一封回信。
注意：1.回信需要包括全部要点;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 3.字数60左右。
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help?????.
……
Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China
Yours,
Li Hua
参考作文：
Dear Linda，
I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help. Firstly, it’s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. What’s more, you’d better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.
Above all, you should be confident in yourself(有自信) and don’t give up(放弃)whenever you meet with difficulty(遇到困难)。 I’m sure you will succeed through(通过…而成功) your hard work.
Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
