教你4个高分写作的秘诀

　　在雅思写作备考中，考生比较容易进入的一个误区就是“题海战术”。到处收集作文题目，然后每天写2-3篇，以期写作水平在能在短期内迅速提高。其实不然，适当数量的写作实战练习是必不可少的，但是并非批量生产、机械运动就有效。小编总结了四大写作高分经验供广大考生参考学习，希望考生们可以从题目中以小见大、举一反三。

　　雅思大作文备考--教你4个高分写作的秘诀

　　秘诀一：让步(making concession)

　　让步的论证是中国考生较陌生的一个概念，其实在学状语从句时，我们就学过让步的关系，先退一步承认一个与自己观点相反的事实，再转折给出自己的观点，否定前者。句型如下：

　　Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that...…

　　As is granted/ Admittedly...…

　　Opponents would argue that...…

　　举个简单的例子，一个男生向女生告白，被女生拒绝，她就会委婉的用让步的论证来表达自己的想法，她会先承认男生的一些优点，再转折说自己并不喜欢他。这 样既能表达自己的观点，又不至于伤害对方。让步这种方法的优点为能较全面的看待一个问题，而且反驳更能有的放矢。具体例子如下：

　　Eg. People don not believe that saving money is a good idea in modern society.

　　这个Topic sentence的观点很明确，存钱在当代社会不是好主意，显然，用让步论证的话，我们要先承认存钱的优点，再根据所列有点进行反驳。

　　As is granted, saving money offers people a sense of security in case of emergency. However, people tend to believe that wise investment can get more profits。

　　秘诀二：比较(contrast &comparison)

　　在雅思大写作中，考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比较，相同关系叫对照(comparison)，相反关系叫对比。此类论证我们重点掌握一些对比对照关系的连词：

　　In contrast,by contrast,on the contrary,while,whereas

　　Likewise, similarly

　　秘诀三：列数据(raising figures)

　　句型：

　　As is reported/ investigated/ researched...…

　　It is reported that …...

　　A recent research conducted by...…Bureau reveals that…...

　　列数据的写作方法较讲道理更有说服力，但是这就需要我们在平时生活中多做积累才能应付列举考试中出现的各个话题的一些相关数字。

　　雅思考试中的数据其实可以分成两大类，一类是有科学依据的，明确记载的数据;另一类是指一些调查报告的数据，如大学生平均一天花多少时间自习，初中生平均一天花多少时间玩电脑游戏等，这类数据无据可依，考生完全可以自己根据论证内容给出数据，但一定要符合逻辑。我们通过一例来使用列数据的雅思写作方法：

　　Eg.The retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community。

　　要对这样一个topic sentence做列数据的扩展，我们首先要找到可列数据的点，此题有两处，一是退休老人的年龄，二是所花时间。结合上述句型，得出论证过程如下：

　　As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day。

　　秘诀四：引用(quotation)

　　在雅思大作文写作论证的过程中，表达一些观点的时候，如果能拿名人名言来进行论证则更有说服力，说明某位名人的观点和你的观点是达成一致，形成共鸣的。但引用要求考生要有相当大的积累，由于备考时间紧迫，此类论证可以少用。

　　小编特别提醒：引用名人名言就意味着引用别人的观点，所以只要引两到三句起到论证自己观点的作用的话就可以了，点到为止，而不是中文写作中，引用越多越好。

　　雅思大作文中的精彩范句

　　According to a recent survey,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

　　依照最近的一项调查，每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟相关的疾病。

　　The latest surveys show that Quiet a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

　　最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

　　No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

　　没有一项发明象互联网同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

　　People seem to fail to takesintosaccount the fact that education does not end with graduation.

　　人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

　　Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.

　　许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

　　Nowadays ,many students always gosintosraptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin.Unfortunately,for most young people,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

　　当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。

　　In view of the seriousness of this problem,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

　　考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。

　　proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.

　　应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。

　　Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus,which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

　　许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。

　　There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem:the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

　　无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。

　　An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

　　一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

　　a proper part-time job does not occupy student's too much time.In fact,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study.As an old saying goes:All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

　　一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。

　　Any government which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.

　　任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。

　　An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

　　越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

　　When it comes to education ,the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

　　说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

　　The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

　　大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

　　It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure.

　　无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冬的痛苦生活。

　　Although this view is widely held,this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

　　尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点任何年龄进行。

　　No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is the most important aspect of his life.

　　没有人能否人这一事实：教育是人生最重要的一方面。

　　People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.

　　人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。