雅思写作常见错误 来看看你犯过几条
在听力、阅读、写作、口语四项雅思考试科目当中,写作一直是困扰中国大陆的雅思考生的难题。雅思写作想要拿高分,不仅仅取决于你的文笔有多么的好、词句有多么的优美,更重要的是在一些细节上的把握。下面是小编为您收集整理的雅思写作常见错误,供大家参考!
雅思写作常见错误 来看看你犯过几条
一、such as与for example的混用
我们知道,在表示举例子的时候,such as与like是完全等同的,如:
Wild flowers such as/like orchids and primroses are becoming rare.
但是同学们对于such as、for example 的把握还是不够准确。我们都知道,后者接句子前者接词语表示举例子。于是就有了下面的写法:
There is a similar word in many languages, such as in French and Italian.
这里的such as改为for example为好,因为“in French and Italian”其实是“there is a similar word in French and Italian”的简化,所以要用for example来引出例证。再来看类似的例子:
It is possible to combine computer science with other subjects, for example physics.
二、assume 及claim 使用不够准确
我们知道,think, assume, claim是议论文中常用引出观点的动词。在实际作文中,同学们往往认为几个词的意思是一样的,完全可以代换,所以拿过来就用。甚至还有同学把consider也拿过来与之混用。我们首先还是从定义来看这几个词的不同:
Think: to have opinion or belief about sth
翻译为“认为”,通常接宾语从句来表达比较确定的观点。
Assume: to think or accept that sth is true but without having proof of it.
翻译为“假设、假定”,是否有事实依据是不确定的。
Claim: to say sth is true although it has not been proved and other people may not believe it.
翻译为“声称”,用这个词往往意味着不赞同紧跟其后的观点,所以很少用作‘I claim that......"
Scientist are claiming a breakthrough in the fight against cancer, but in fact......
所以“It is claimed that”通常翻译为“有报道称......”和“it is reported that ”的区别在于后者翻译为“据报道”,往往代表着作者赞同报告的内容。
Consider: to think about sth carefully, especially in order to make a decision
翻译为“考虑”,一般不用作引出观点,看个例子:
We are considering buying a new car.
所以,千万不要在雅思大作文的第一段(观点表达段)就因为用词把握不准而导致对整篇文章的低分印象。
三、介词使用错误
1、普通介词的误用
一般表现为固定搭配错误,如常把provide sb with sth用成provide sb sth;be satisfied with用成be satisfied for等等,虽然这样的错误看似无伤大雅,但在考官眼里就是影响顺畅阅读的,当然会影响最终成绩。解决的办法简单而古老:把常见的固定搭配牢记于心,问题自然就解决了。
2、 “to”作为介词的误用
“to”最常见的用法是以动词不定式符号的形式出现的,所以同学们也已经习惯了“to do”的固定搭配。对于一些如walk to me, to the left等介词to表方向等常见用法一般也不会出现错误。但是对于与动词搭配的介词to就会经常犯错,如:
More and more students have taken to depend on their parents to make decision for them。
这里的“take to“means “to begin to do sth as a habit”其中”to“为介词,所以后面只能接名词或相当于名词的词,如动名词。所以句中depend on 应改为“depending on”。“take to”的另一个常用用法也需要牢记,如:
He hasn’t taken to his new school. (这里”take to” means “to start liking sb or sth”)
Prefer A to B中的“to”也是介词,会有prefer doing sth to doing sth/ prefer sth to sth else,另外,“prefer to do sth rather than do sth”中的“to”可是真正的不定式符号。
类似的常用用法请同学们牢记:
Be used to doing;Adapt to doing;Adjust to doing;prefer doing sth. to doing sth;Be accustomed to doing;See to doing等等,请注意平时仔细积累。
四、表“建议”的词汇后面忘记用虚拟从句
这是摘自学生雅思作文中的一个病句:I suggest he continues his study instead of working after graduation from high school.
因为"suggest"翻译为“建议”,所以后面的从句应该用虚拟语气,句中“continues”部分应该改为“(should) continue”。
注意:一定要牢记以下常见表“建议”的词汇,而且要记住这些词接从句时要用虚拟语:Recommend,suggest,advise
五、compare与contrast的误用
我们先从两者的定义入手来看两者的区别。 Compare的定义为:to examine people or things to see how they are similar or different. Contrast的定义为:to compare two or more things to show the difference between them. 由定义不难看出前者侧重于找到两个或多个事物的异同,而后者则侧重于它们的不同。
看个例句:
It is interesting to compare their situations to ours./It is interesting to contrast their situations to ours.
前一句翻译为:对比一下我们的情况与他们的情况会很有趣;后一句的翻译为:我们的情况与他们的情况有很大的不同,这很有趣。
再看一个引自OXFORD ADBANCED LEARNER’S DICTIONARY的例子:
There is an obvious contrast between the culture of East and West.
The company lost $7 million in contrast to a profit of $6.2 million a year earlier.
When you look at their new system,ours seems very old-fashioned by contrast.
不难发现,Compare翻译为“与......相比”而contrast可译为“明显不同的是......”,切记这种翻译方式就不会用错彼此了。
雅思小作文写作高分句型大搜集
1.the table shows the changes in the number of......over the period from......to...... 该表格描述了在......年之......年间......数量的变化。
2.the bar chart illustrates that...... 该柱状图展示了......
3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding...... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。
4.the diagram shows (that)...... 该图向我们展示了......
5.the pie graph depicts (that)....... 该圆形图揭示了......
6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。
7.the figures/statistics show (that)...... 数据(字)表明......
8.the tree diagram reveals how...... 该树型图向我们揭示了怎样......
9.the data/statistics show (that)...... 该数据(字)可以这样理解......
10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论...
11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table...... 如图所示......
12.according to the chart/figures...... 根据这些表(数字)......
13.as is shown in the table...... 如表格所示......
14.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in...... 从图中可以看出,XX发生了巨大变化。
15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到......
16.this is a graph which illustrates... 这个图表向我们展示了......
17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from......to...... 该表格描述了......年到......年间a与b的比例关系。
18.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in...... 该图以圆形图形式描述了......总的趋势。 19.this is a column chart showing...... 这是个柱型图,描述了...
20.as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of...... 如图所示,两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。
21.over the period from...to...the...remained level. 在......至......期间,......基本不变。
22.in the year between......and......在......年到......期间...
23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...... 1995年至1998三年里...
24.from then on/from this time onwards......从那时起......
25.the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). ......月(年)至......月(年)......的数量基本不变。
26.the number sharply went up to...... 数字急剧上升至......
27.the percentage of...stayed the same between......and...... ......至...期间......的比率维持不变。
28.the figures peaked at...in(month/year) ......的数目在......月(年)达到顶点,为......
29.the percentage remained steady at...... 比率维持在......
30.the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of......的比例比......的比例略高(低)。
31.there is not a great deal of difference between......and......与......的区别不大。
32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of...... 该图表表明......的数目增长了三倍。
33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily.......逐年减少,而......逐步上升。
34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of[%].......的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点,为...百分点。
35.the figures/situation bottomed out in... 数字(情况)在......达到底部。
36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough. 数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。
37.a is ...times as much/many as b. a是b的......倍。
38.a increased by......a增长了......
39.a increased to......a增长到......
40.high/low/great/small/ percentage. 比低高(低)
41.there is an upward trend in the number of......数字呈上升趋势。
42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to......到...发生急剧上升。
43.from...to...the rate of decrease slow down. 从......到......,下降速率减慢。
44.from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the......,reaching a figure of...... 从这年起,......逐渐下降至...
45.be similar to......与......相似
46.be the same as......与......相同
47.there are a lot similarities/differences between......and......与......之间有许多相似(不同)之处
48.a has something in common with b a于b有共同之处。
49.the difference between a and b lies in......a与b之间的差别在于...
50...(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in......年......急剧上升。