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英语作文如何造句

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  下面是学习啦小编整理的英语作文造句方法, 希望对大家有帮助。

  英语作文如何造句

  如何造句?——

  1.句子要完整。完整是好句子的第一要点。

  2.句子要连贯。所谓连贯,一是指意思上的连贯;二是指结构上的连贯。也就是说一个句子不仅要做到思想内容的和谐,还要做到遣词造句的和谐。例如: Tell my friend if she is at home,I will go to see her.

  该句因语序的关系,使意思不明确。如果 my friend与she是同一个人,我们应该说:If my friend is at home,tell her I will go to see her.如果不是同一个人,就应说:Tell my friend I will go to see her if she is at home.

  又如:An Indian came into the doctor's door,and walked quickly to the waiting room.

  该句两部分不合乎思维顺序,动作没有按先后排列,所以造成了语无伦次。应改为:

  An Indian came into the waiting room,and walked quickly to the doctor's door.

  以上从内容上分析了句子的连贯性。即写句子要保持自然的语序,让意义紧密相连的词紧挨在一起,同时各部分要按一定的逻辑排列。

  3.句子须简洁。句中不应有任何不必要的词。只要意思充分地表达了,用词越少越好。用词过多只会使意思更加模糊不清,而不是更加清楚。

  4.句子要重点突出。凡是重要的意思都应在表达时予以强调。为此说话时人们可用各种方法,如提高声音、放慢语速、使用短句或加上手势等。写文章时,也可以使用倒装、感叹、重复、反问等方法对应该强调的词语或句子加重语气。一般情况下,一个句子的开头和末尾是比较引人注目的地方。如:There was an old woman at the head of the queue.这是一般的表达方式。但可进行这样改:At the head of the queue was an old woman.通过这种结构的改变分别突出了at the head of the queue以及an old woman.这样句子就显得非常生动有力。

  5.句子要多样化。句型的多样化,对好的文章来说是必不可少的。好几句长短相同、结构相似的句子连在一起,如果又用同一个名词或代词作主语,必然会显得很单调。为多样化起见,短句和长句,简单句、并列句和复合句等都应交错使用。也可偶尔用一个问句、祈使句或感叹句,但是不要只是为了多样化而频频变换句型。

  6.句子要一致。一个句子无论长短应当只有一个中心思想。句中的词、短语应当紧紧围绕这一中心思想服务。如果时而谈甲,时而谈乙,则会破坏句子的一致性。如: Class Three have a map,and the map is on the wall of their classroom,it's a map of China.

  此句在语法和词汇上都没有什么错,但由于东拼西凑,让人不知所云。如果将这一大句改为三个短句,使每句都有一个中心思想,那么就条理清楚,意义明确了。试比较: Class Three have a map.The map is on the wall of their classroom.It's a map of China.

  句子的一致性是一个句子的意思清楚与否的关键。要达到一致性就要保持主语的一致、思想的完整、逻辑的合理和修饰的紧密。如: I opened the door,and the cat was under a desk,and the desk was black.

  这个句子意思混乱,因为主语不断改变。如果我们用I作全句主语,并作适当删改,则句子简单明了,意思清楚而且句子紧凑。比较一下: I opened the door and found the cat under a black desk.

  上面谈了一下什么样的句子才是好句子。那么同学们在平时写作中经常犯些什么错误呢?一般有以下几种:

  1.语序错误。句子语序有自然语序和倒装语序两种。一不注意就会出错。例如:

  Could you tell me where is the park?→ Could you tell me where the park is?

  What a beautiful girl is she!→ ?What a beautiful girl she is!

  2.句子中时态、语态的错误。英语中常用时态有一般式、现在式和完成式。语态有主动语态和被动语态,一定要正确使用。如:

  The house has been built five years ago.→ The house was built five years  ago.

  The bike hasn't returned yet.→ The bike hasn't been returned yet.

  3.句子中出现不平行结构。平行结构类似汉语的排比句式,它常常用同样的格式表达两个以上平行内容。平行结构可以是单词、短语或分句。如:

  We can get there either by car or taking a bus.→ We can get there either by car or by bus.

  She likes studying English but she doesn't like English grammar.→ She likes studying English but she doesn't like studying English grammar.

  4.串句。串句是指两个以上的句子串写在一起,中间不见标点,不见连词,造成结构层次不清,逻辑意义混乱。改正方法:用标点(逗号、分号或句号)将串句点开;添加适当连词,使句子形成并列或主从关系,用修饰语替换其中一个或几个句子,使整个句子变成修饰语的简单句。如:

  Everybody thinks a king can do he wants to do.→ Everybody thinks a king can do what he wants to do.

  5.汉语式英语。英汉两种语言在表达习惯上有很大差异,要注意别犯汉语式英语错误。如:

  This morning has no classes.→ There are no classes this morning .

  Although he is over 60,but he is very healthy.→ He is over 60,but he is very healthy.→ Although he is over 60,he is very healthy.

  除了上面所述外,对英语的五种基本句型和其他常见句型也要了如指掌,只有这样才能写出清楚、正确的句子来。在进行英语写作时,一个同样的意思,常可用同义或近义词语表达,或用不同的句型结构来表达。因此,平时,多做一些句型转换训练是非常有必要的。下面做几个小题练练吧!

  改错:

  ①She has finished the writing yesterday.

  ②To study English well,England is the best place to go.

  ③I don't know when we will have a meeting and where the meeting will be held.

  ④He very likes English.

  ⑤What you mean?

  Key:

  ①He finished the writing yesterday./He has finished the writing.

  ②To study English well,the best place for you to go is England.

  ③I don'tknow when and where we will have a meeting.

  ④He likes English very much.

  ⑤What do you mean?

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