英语高考作文之如何遣词造句(2)
英语高考作文之如何遣词造句(二)
1.改变句子开头的方式。
可以适当地把一些成分(如状语)提前，放在句子的开头，这样使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏，增加书面表达的表现力。
(1)我今天早晨收到了你十月十八日的来信。
A：I received your letter which was written on October 18th this morning.(一般)
B：Your letter of October 18th reached me this morning.(优秀)
(2)那个房子既黑暗又空荡，跟我记得的形式不同。
A：The house was dark and empty.So it looked very different from the way I remembered it.(一般)
B：Dark and empty，the house looked very different from the way I remembered it.(优秀)
2.使用一些表达感情的句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。
(1)那是一部有趣的电影。
A：It is an interesting film.(一般)
B：What an interesting film it is!(优秀)
C：How interesting a film it is!(优秀)
(2)只是当他回来时我们才查明了真相。
A：We found out the truth when he returned.(一般)
B：We didn't find out the truth until he returned.(优秀)
C：Only when he returned did we find out the truth.(优秀)
3.句式多样，复杂得体。
在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句式，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格结构、分词结构等也可使用。
(1)他的父亲是否能痊愈还是个问题。他为此非常焦虑不安。
A：He doesn't know whether his father will recover，so he is very upset.(一般)
B：Whether his father will recover is still a problem.And he is very upset.(简单句与复合句共用)(优秀)
(2)你每天帮我学英语。你太好了!
A：You help me study English every day.You are very kind.(一般)
B：It's very kind of you to help me learn English every day.(优秀)
C：How kind of you to help me learn English every day!(优秀)
练习
1. 选择适当的单词填空
1.Don't read ________ the sunlight.(in/under)
2.He has a ________ body temperature.(high/hot)
3.She lives ________ and often feels ________.(alone/lonely)
4.I think the patient will get ________ soon.(good/well)
5.We________Christmas with a tree and many presents.(congratulate/celebrate)
2. 一句多译
1.妈妈匆匆忙忙上班去了，连早饭都没吃。
Mother went to work hurrily;she didn't have breakfast.
=Mother went to work ____________.She didn't have breakfast.
=Mother went to work in a hurry ____________ breakfast.
2.我宁愿呆在家里也不愿去看电影。
I prefer ____________ at home rather than ____________ the film.
=I prefer ____________ at home to ____________ the film.
=I would rather ________ at home than go to see the film.
3.我们到达农场时，受到了农民的热烈欢迎。
When we got to the farm，we were given a warm welcome by the farmers.
=When__________ the farm，we__________a warm welcome from the farmers.
=On________________，wewere ________________ by the farmers.
3. 句型转换
1.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词)
=___________________________________________________________.
2.I won't believe what he says.(使用状语从句)
=___________________________________________________________.
3.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句改写)
=___________________________________________________________.