如何提高托福写作:20170702托福独立写作解析与范文

　　编者按：托福考试是很多人所纠结的问题，因为这考试还是有难度的。但是纵观一张试卷，作文还是最难的。

　　20170702托福独立写作题目：

　　范文：

　　In the face of fierce competition from international students and decline of local students’ interests in academic study, the government needs an effective plan to improve education quality of high schools. Undoubtedly, for any plan to take effect, the first step is to train teachers who are directly responsible for students’ study. In my mind, between options of training a few at first or training all of them online at the same time, the latter one must be a better strategy.

　　In consideration to efficiency, training all teaching staff online can help the government improve overall education quality in short time. Teachers usually have different schedules, so it must be difficult to have them together frequently in a seminar. Possibly, the compulsory training will arouse complaints. However, thanks to the wide coverage of Internet, teachers can easily access training materials at any place and any time individually and flexibly. Moreover, as high school teachers, they must possess the consciousness and capability of studying on their own. Therefore, with all teachers starting to study at the first time, the process can be greatly simplified. On the contrary, it costs twice as much as time to train a few elite teachers who then convey what they obtain to peers back to school.

　　In consideration to effectiveness, training all teachers online together will generate an atmosphere of positive competition and cooperation. It is more encouraging that all teachers begin at the same starting point. There can be a private account for each participant that records his or her studying progress and ranks among peers. In addition, trainees of all schools can freely share their thoughts and get inspiration from each other on the giant cyber environment. Under peer pressure, teachers will become more involved and active. However, another proposal of selecting a few good teachers getting training will run into troubles at the initial stage. The problem lies in how to select the “good teachers”. It is difficult to set a convincing standard that is agreeable and acceptable to all. A foreseeable outcome might be the emerging of bias between those selected and unselected.

　　To sum up, the wise choice of the government to improve education must be providing online training to all teachers together.

　　The government wants to improve the education of high school, and there are two plans:

　　1 Choose a group of good teachers and train them first, and after that let them go back to their schools and train other teachers.

　　2 Provide training for every teacher online, with providing online materials and let them study individually.

　　这一天的独立写作重复2016年7月10日的考题

　　1 the characters of online training

　　1) convenient and flexible

　　2) huge database of training materials

　　3) free discussion platform for all

　　2 teachers

　　1) busy schedule

　　2) strong study ability

　　3) competition

　　4) standard of good teachers

　　作者:Cindy

　　公众号:英文写作素材

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