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雅思写作的套路解析

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  应对雅思写作大作文,一样讲套路。多看一些范文,学习大作文的行文思路和写作结构,然后照着模板来练习,雅思写作提升很快哒!下面来看看雅思写作的套路解析这篇文章吧。

雅思写作必看“套路”!5.5到7全靠这几招

  我相信很多烤鸭都有过一样的经历。很多考生在写文章的时候也经常用这样的语句彰显人类复读机的本质。比如之前很多学生在写作中常出现的,令人头大而大家又意外地用着很顺手的“模版”:

  It is very importantfor the government to alleviate poverty (扶贫) as this isreally useful. This will bring many advantages to the country, so it is very necessary. In many cases, the benefits brought by this can be seen everywhere, and people will think that it is really good to live in such a good country.

  考官看完的心路历程:Wait, 我是不是刚才改了一个复读机的卷子?

  这段话一共60个词,但反反复复就强调了一个意思:这事儿超重要。

  这位考生你莫不是给考官念了一段洗脑经?

  不用说,这段文字出现在雅思写作卷子上,是拿不到高分的。那么我们怎么能摆脱“复读机”的本质,在雅思写作考试中拿个高分呢?

  方法一:换同义词

  这是最简单粗暴的方法,考官也喜欢花里胡哨的词汇,同义词越多,文章就能越漂亮。这段文字中出现的表示“褒贬”的词汇是在雅思写作中十分常见的,建议我们每类至少记三个。

  好

  [adj.] advantageous, beneficial, profitable, worthwhile, rewarding, expedient, conducive

  [n.] advantage(s), benefit(s), strength(s), merit(s), bright side(s), virtue(s)

  有助

  [v.] benefit, contribute to, aid to, be conducive to

  重要

  [adj.] important, necessary, significant, essential, vital, crucial, principal, noteworthy, imperative, substantial

  促进

  [v.] enhance, promote, facilitate, foster, optimize, stimulate, boost, cultivate, accelerate

  获得

  [v.] accomplish, achieve, complete, finish, fulfill

  支持

  [v.] favor, be for, approve of, side with, stand on the side of, consent to, vote for

  坏

  [adj.] disadvantageous, harmful, adverse, problematic, detrimental, prejudicial

  [n.] disadvantage(s), drawback(s), weakness(es), demerit(s), downside(s), shortcoming(s)

  阻碍/破坏

  [v.] damage, impair, spoil, endanger, undermine, hinder, hamper, obstruct, deteriorate, aggravate, jeopardize, eradicate

  导致(多为贬)

  [v.] cause, result in, lead to, trigger, give rise to, bring about, contribute to, generate

  方法二:换词性

  假如我们词汇量不够大,或因备考时间太短没办法短期内背这么多单词,这种方法其实是比较事半功倍的一种技巧,能有效用上我们背过的仅有单词,只需要把词性一换,又摇身变成另一个词。

  举个栗子:

  It is very important [adj.] for the government to alleviate poverty as this is really useful [adj.].

  = It is of (considerable) importance [n.] for the government to alleviate poverty as this is of (markable) use [n.].

  常见英语词性间的互相转化规律有:

  动变名:

  +ment / +tion / +ance / +ing

  e.g.

  achieve – achievement

  suggest – suggestion

  perform – performance

  train – training

  名变形:

  +y / +ed / +ful / +less / +able / +ous / -t / +al / +ly

  e.g.

  guilt – guilty

  balance – balanced

  help – helpful / helpless

  comfort – comfortable

  advantage – advantageous

  significance – significant

  person – personal

  live – lively (活跃的)

  形变副:

  +ly

  e.g. in particular [adj.] = particularly [adv.]

  不同词性使用时可能放在不同的词组、句式里,每种词性的具体用法,同学们平时可以多查词典的例句或详解来正确把握。如:

  Top students may not be easily satisfied with their academic achievements [n.].

  = Top students may not be easily satisfied with the goals of study that they have achieved [v.].

  这样我们就会发现,背一个词能顶两个用,有时同一个词的词性变化甚至比我们背过它的同义词都多。我们还可以再去背一些表示“巨大的、显著的”这类含义的词汇,能让这样的表达更加丰富多样。

  另外,这个方法在小作文里也相当好使。比如:

  The percentage of second language speakers surged [v.] from 25% to 61%.

  = The percentage of second language speakers experienced a (noticeable) surge [n.] from 25% to 61%.

  = The percentage of second language speakers showed a surging [adj.] trend from 25% to 61%.

  方法三:扩展内容

  很多老师在课上说得最多的就是如何从多角度去扩展一个论点,加上适当的解释和例子,让考官感觉你的文章就是男人的衣柜某澜之家,每次都有新发现,句句都有新体验。

  常见的扩展方法包括但不仅限于:

  因果扩展

  举例扩展

  反向扩展

  拿开头那段文字举例,不难发现每句话只是在反复强调扶贫的重要性,但并没有详细说明:为什么要扶贫?扶贫有哪些具体的效果?如果不扶贫会有什么后果?

  仔细思考如上问题后,我们可以将它扩展成言之(那可以说是十分)有物的片段了:

  It is of considerable importance for the government to alleviate poverty as the wealth gap may be narrowed to a large extent. One of the most noticeable merits of this is that social stability can be significantly guaranteed.Only under such circumstance could the economy make constant progress. If the poor are not financially supported by the government, they might consider themselves vulnerable, be unwilling to contribute to the advance of the country, or even hinder the growth.

  这样一来,文章词汇也丰富了,内容更是充实了许多。

  同学们可以试着用以上三种方法自己来修改下面这个片段:

  Generation gap (代沟) is a big problem which happens between parents and children.It is normal that children will have different thoughts with their parents (why?), but this may be bad for both children and their parents. Many serious problems (what problems?) may occur when there is a gap between the two generations. (consequences?)

  把以上三个方法综合应用,就能最大程度满足雅思大作文【思路】和【语言】两方面的考察要求,考官也会更青睐这样的文章。

  雅思写作套路句精选37例 高分常备

  1. According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

  依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。

  2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

  最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

  3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

  没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

  4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

  人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

  5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

  越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

  6. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

  说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

  7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.

  许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

  8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.

  应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。

  9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

  越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,像犯罪和卖淫。

  10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

  许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客。

  11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

  无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题:城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。

  12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

  一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

  13. A proper part-time job does not occupy students' too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

  一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻。

  14. Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.

  任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。

  15.Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

  当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。

  16. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

  考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。

  17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

  大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

  18. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.

  无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。

  19. Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

  尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。

  20. No one can deny the fact that a person's education is the most important aspect of his life.

  没有人能否认:教育是人生最重要的一方面。

  21. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.

  人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。

  22. In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.

  在过去的几十年,先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。

  23. In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.

  事实上,我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。

  24. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

  我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。

  25. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

  人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。

  26. The information I've collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.

  从这几年我搜集的信息来看,这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。

  27. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.

  现在,人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。

  28. This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.

  这是一个关系到生死的问题,任何国家都不能忽视。

  29. For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:

  我同意后者,有如下理由:

  30. Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.

  在给出我的观点之前,我想看看双方的观点是重要的。

  31. This view is now being questioned by more and more people.

  这一观点正受到越来越多人的质疑。

  32. Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information I've collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.

  尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展,用自行车的人数会减少,自行车可能会消亡, 然而,这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会发挥极其重要的作用。

  33. Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.

  环境学家指出:持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题,而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。

  34. In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.

  考虑到这些严重的状况,我们比以往任何时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。

  35. Using bicycle contributes greatly to people's physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.

  使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康,并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。

  36. Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.

  尽管自行车有许多明显的优点,但是它也存在它的问题。

  37. Bicycle can't be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.

  在速度和舒适度方面,自行车是无法和汽车、火车这样的交通工具相比的

  收藏|四种雅思高分写作套路

  有不少这类考生,词汇量不低,语言功底不错,语法也能灵活运用,但是在最后的雅思成绩中,总是徘徊在6.0-6.5分之间。那么这类同学如何才能更好地跨过6.0-6.5分这坎呢?

  其实要想在写作中拿到更高的分数,写作中的论证质量和逻辑思维的表达才是最重要的。下面跟大家介绍,雅思写作提分的技巧,尤其是写作的开头部分。

  雅思写作题目中的提问方式分成四个大类:观点类(opinion essay)、讨论类(discussion essay)、优劣势类(advantage and disadvantage essay)和报告类(report)。每一种提问方式的题目都有自己不同的开头段写作方法。

  Part 1. Discussion Essay

  观察讨论类的题目,可以发现,这样的题目会有两个观点,并且题目要求“讨论双方观点”和“给出自己的观点”。这样的题目中,其实只用在开头段中写出背景句和转述双方观点就好了,至于个人的观点,可以放到personal idea的段落中。如:

  Some people think citizens should be responsible for their own health costs. Others think it is better to have a health care system which provides free health services.

  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  这个题目的开头段就可以写为:

  People in some countries are paying an increasing amount of money for seeing a doctor, even for a minor illness. (背景句) But, still, some people assert that individuals themselves are supposed to pay for such fees. (一方观点) However, other people disagree and suggest that it is the government’s responsibility to undertake the health costs for its citizens. (另一方观点)

  Part 2. Opinion Essay

  观察观点类题目的特征,我们不难发现,此类题型的特征是题目有且只有一个观点。而题目要求我们回答的是“同意”或“不同意”的观点。所以只要确定好自己的观点,开头段就可以写出来。 例如:

  Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health.

  Do you agree or disagree?

  如果,我们选择同意此观点,可以根据“背景句+直接转述题目+个人观点”的公式。

  These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health. (直接转述题目) Personally, I agree with this idea. (个人观点)

  如果选择不同意题目观点,则可以用“although”的让步状语从句进行改写,得到:

  These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) Although some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health, (although +直接转述题目) personally, I do not agree with this idea. (个人观点)

  Part 3. Advantages & Disadvantage Essay

  优劣势的题目,一般而言都会给出一个现象或者是趋势,这又刚好和我们开头段中的“背景句”吻合了,所以在优劣势文章的开头段的时候就没有必要再写背景句了,直接转述题目就可以了。但是要表达出自己的“优大于劣”或者“劣大于优”的观点,只需要用一句话就搞定了。如:

  Shopping online is replacing shopping in stores.

  Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

  开头段可以写为:

  These days, it is common to see that people prefer choosing online shopping to shopping in physical stores. Although some problems would occur as this trend continues, I believe such development brings more benefits.

  Part 4 Report

  其实report最简单,因为通常题目和优劣势文章一样,会给出一个现象或趋势,所以开头段的组成部分就只有改写题目。如:

  In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes.

  Why is this happening?

  What are the possible solutions to solve this problem?

  开头段可以写为:

  These days, it is common to see that the rate of youth crime has been increasing dramatically all over the globe and it is a most worrying issue of modern society.

  通过以上雅思写作常考三种类型题目开头的整理,相信大家对雅思写作开头已经有了一定的了解了,那么下面就需要靠大家多加练习了。写作6.5分对考生的逻辑推理和论证能力要求更高,因此大家更加勤奋耕耘才是硬道理。

  雅思考官最反感的10种写作套路

  中式英语

  用中式英文开头,不仅会让考官看不懂,还暴露了你的语言功底,语料积累匮乏,是雅思写作中的大忌。

  比如:

  写作主题 1

  The happiest moment in your life

  案例:In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

  写作主题 2

  The population problem

  案例:The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

  二

  胡乱翻译中国俗语

  胡乱翻译中国俗语会起反作用,毕竟考官对中国俗语并不“感冒”,反而会引起考官反感。

  比如:

  写作主题 1

  Is it good to have a large family?

  案例:I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

  写作主题 2

  Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

  案例:Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

  三

  超级啰嗦

  开篇就要主题明了清晰,上来就啰啰嗦嗦表达不清,考官自然认为你的观点模糊,甚至不会表达。

  比如:

  写作主题 1

  Should college students be allowed to get married?

  案例:This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

  写作主题 2

  Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

  案例:Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

  四

  偏离主题

  文不对题自然会扣分,给考官留下的印象就是跑题,想想整体写作分数还会高么?

  比如:

  写作主题

  It is said that nowadays one can‘t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

  案例:I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

  五

  观点不明朗

  雅思大作文很重要的一点就是你的逻辑性和观点,如果观点都不明确,后面的举例证明等都会缺乏说服力,自然分数也不会高。

  比如:

  写作主题

  Should college students be allowed to get married?

  案例:I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

  六

  语法错误不断

  涉及到雅思写作评分标准中的语法多样性和准确性,语法错误不断自然会成为扣分点。

  比如:

  写作主题

  If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished?

  案例:About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.

  七

  意思反复重复

  反复重复一个意思,让考官会觉得你并没有什么可以表达的,或者词汇表达能力有限,自然也会扣分。

  比如:

  写作主题

  Your opinion on DINK families

  案例:My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

  八

  观点绝对化

  考生在使用语言描述事物或者表达自己的观点时,应尽可能避免语言过于绝对化,更应该注意该语言中非绝对化表达方式的学习,这样才能尽显文章内容的客观性。

  比如:

  写作主题 1

  The importance of confidence

  案例:In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

  写作主题 2

  The solution to the traffic problem

  案例:I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

  九

  内容过分简单

  考官想给你打分都没有内容,所以切记开头不要只写一两句话。

  比如:

  写作主题

  The importance of environmental protection

  案例:This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

  十

  用词不当

  用词不当会暴露你的词汇,而且评分标准中谈到“在不同的语境中,使用正确的词性;”所以在使用词汇的时候,正确性也是非常重要的。

  比如:

  写作主题

  Should college students be allowed to get married?

  案例:I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

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