雅思写作7分必备知识点
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雅思写作7分必备知识点
task response 切题
· addressesallparts of the task
· presentsa clear position throughoutthereponse
· presents, extend and supports main ideas, but there may be atendency to over-generalise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.
用中文最简单的理解是:首尾都要回答问题,允许泛泛而谈。
这就是说,其实没必要花太多的精力去考虑观点是否绝对严谨是否意义深刻,关键是要告诉考官你的思考逻辑。这就是剑桥雅思的魅力,它要考你的不是你的思维能力,而是你的语言表达能力。哪怕再ridiculous的观点,只要你能用最恰当的语言去表达,你也可以同样得7分(当然,如果你的目标是8分,你就当我说废话吧)。
还有就是说,很多题目本身包含很广泛的概念,很多大学教授用十几万字都解释不清的关系,怎么就能让我们这些门外汉用三言两语就解释好呢。毕竟我们都是正常人,我们都有自己的思考能力和理解能力,我们说的每一个观点都是make sense,不make sense的是我们没把那个观点说清楚。
Bcoherence and cohesion 连贯性
· logically organisesinformation and ideas, there is clearprogression throughout
· lisesa range of cohesive devicesappropriatelyalthough there may be some under-or over use
· presentsa clear topicwithin each paragragh
用中文最简单的意思是:分段分点,每点之前必须有连接词。
考官最为推介的范式(以argumentation的题目为例,因为report类的文章更死板了):开头段+主体段(让步一段,支持/反对两段)+结尾段。其实说白了,就是我们最熟悉不过的模版。也就是说,模版是非常有用的,之所以变成没用是因为用模板的那个人没有用。
Clexcial resource 词汇
· usesa sufficient rangeof vocabulary toallow some flexibility and precision
· usesless common lexical itemswith someawareness of style and collocation
· mayproduce occasional errosin wordchoice, spelling and/or word formation
用中文最简单的意思是:足够就好,不需要多;一两个大词就够,不需要滥。
一说到单词,相信我们并不陌生,甚至认为学英语就是背单词,写作就是单词的选美与堆砌。尽管我们都知道这是不对的,但是依旧默默地坚持着,比如说背诵一大堆除了莎士比亚见过之外其他人都没见过的大词。这样的复习会很累,而且会逐渐把雅思写作从逻辑表述变成词汇大杂烩。
经过我写了大概30篇雅思作文,我觉得我们需要的词汇其实真的不多我想说的是,记单词最好的方法是,把单词放到句型或者例句上面来,然后句型或者例句一定要与雅思写作topic相关。如果不相关,证明那个词就算记住了,也不会用。
Dgrammaticalrange and accuracy 语法
· uses a variety of complex structures
· producesfrequent error-free sentences
· hasgood control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few mistake
用中文最简单的意思是:句子结构多样性和允许语法错误的存在。
对于句子结构多样性,这一点,我们中国学生肯定没问题的,什么定语从句,什么名词性从句,什么状语从句,倒装句,虚拟语态,被动语态等,我们只会过犹不及。从我的个人经验来看,我有时候会把定语从句和同位语从句搞乱(并不是我们不知道有什么不同,而是一紧张就很容易忽视了)。
说到语法错误,可以说,我们中国学生最最最常犯的语法错误都是非常低级的。
写作同义词转换表
附上常用的同义词转换表,多看看多用用,写作的时候就再也不会翻来覆去的一直用那么几个词了。
中性动词
1.导致:v.cause, bring about, give rise to, lead to, generate, create, Be a contributingfactor to
2.认为:v.point out, argue, claim, assert, think, consider
3.强调:v.emphasize, bring/call attention to, accentuate, heighten, strengthen
4.集中:v.focus on, concentrate on
5.解决:v.combat, address, tackle, resolve, solve
6.从事:v.carry out, conduct, perform
7.承认:v.concede, admit, acknowledge, accept, allow, grant
正向动词
1.支持:v.support, advocate, agree with
2.增加:v.increase, grow, rise, enlarge
n. increase, growth, rise,enlargement
3.改善:v.improve, enhance, upgrade, boost
n. improvement, enhancement, boom
4.扩张:v.expand, enlarge, extend, widen, broaden
n. expansion, enlargement,extension
5.提高:v.augment, increase, develop, intensify
n. augment, increase, development
6.发展:v.develop, advance, grow, evolve, flourish
n. development, advancement,growth, flourishing
7.产生:v.develop, come into being/existence, come about
8.获得:v.acquire, gain, get, obtain, attain
9.执行:v.implement, execute, put into effect, perform
n. implementation, performance
10.实现:v.achieve, fulfill, gain, accomplish, attain
n. achievement, accomplishment, attainment
11.开始:v.commence, begin, start
n. commencement, beginning,start
12. 促进:v.promote, further, advance, encourage, stimulate, foster
n. promotion, advancement
13.鼓励:v.stimulate, encourage, act as stimulus, motivate
n. encouragement, incentive, motivation
14.唤起:v.arouse, cause, induce, prompt, trigger, spark off
15.需要:v.call for, demand, require
16. 取代:v.replace, take the place of, substitute for
n. replacement, substitutionfor, in place of
17. 加快:v.accelerate, speed up, quicken
n. Acceleration, speeding up
18. 减轻:v.abate, lessen, reduce, alleviate, mitigate
n. abatement, lessening,alleviation, mitigation
19. 保护:v.protect, preserve, conserve
n. protection, preservation,conservation
20.保卫:v.safeguard, defend, shield
n. safeguard, defence, shelter
21. 建立:v.establish, set up, found, construct
n. establishment, foundation,construction
22. 遵守(规则,法律):abideby, comply with, follow, respect, act in accordance with
23. 允许:v.allow, permit, give the means to, facilitate
负向动词
1.反对:v.object, raise objections, oppose
2.减少:v.decrease, lower, reduce, cut down
n. decrease, reduction, drop,decline
3. 耗尽:v.deplete, exhaust, use up
n. depletion, exhaustion, usingup,
4. 阻碍:v.hamper, hinder, obstruct, impede, inhibit
n. hindrance, obstruction,obstacle, impediment
5.限制:v.limit, curb, restrict, place a limit on
n. limit, restriction
6. 危及:v.endanger, imperil, jeopardize, put at risk
7. 衰败:v.deteriorate, degrade, degenerate, rot
n. deterioration, degeneration
8. 恶化:v.exacerbate, aggravate, worsen, inflame
n. exacerbation, aggravation, worsening
9. 加剧:v.intensify, escalate, sharpen, aggravate
n. escalation, intensification,aggravation
10.破坏:v.damage, destroy, ruin, devastate
n. damage, destruction, ruin,devastation
adj. devastating, destructive
11. 污染:v.pollute, contaminate
n. pollution, contamination
12. 败坏:v.pervert, corrupt, deprave, lead astray, debase
13.扭曲:v.distort, pervert, misrepresent, falsify, misstate, misreport
14.削弱:v.weaken, undermine, impair, invalidate
15. 干涉:v.interfere in/with, intervene in, impinge on/upon(侵犯)
n.interference/intervention/involvement in/with
16. 侵犯:v.encroach on/upon (time/rights/personal life)
n. encroachment on/upon =impinging on/upon
17. 与···相违背/相矛盾:runcounter to = run contrary to
Contradict (each other)= conflict with =be at odds with sth
18.误解:v.misunderstand, misapprehend, misinterpret
n. misunderstanding,misapprehension, misinterpretation
19. 逃避:v.escape, break out, evade, elude
20.遭受:v.suffer from, be stricken with, be afflicted with
21.违反:v.violate, disobey, transgress, infringe
n. violation, infringement,contravention, breach
22. 忽视:v.lose sight of, ignore, neglect
23.疏远:v.alienate, isolate, become/get estranged from
n. alienation, isolation,estrangement
其他重要的同义词替换
1.大量的:enormous,massive, tremendous, considerable
2.重要的:significant,substantial, crucial, important
3.严重的:adj.severe, serious, acute, drastic
adv. severely, seriously,acutely, drastically
4. 有害的:adj.hazardous, dangerous, harmful
5. 贫穷的:adj.poor, poverty-stricken, destitute, impoverished
6. 富有的:adj.rich, wealthy, affluent
7. 差距:n.gap, disparity, divergence
8. 积极的:beneficial,advantageous
9.消极的:baneful,detrimental
10. 明显的:manifest,obvious, evident, apparent
11. 影响:impact,repercussion, effect, ramification
12. 人类:thehuman race, human being, humankind, humanity
13. 当代:incurrent society, in this day and age, in present-day society, in contemporarysociety
14. 传统的:traditional,conventional, old-fashioned
15. 健康的:healthy,vigorous, robust
16. 有营养的:nutritious,nourishing, wholesome, healthy
常用正向形容词
Adequate/ basic/broad/ general/ sufficient 充分的/基本的/宽泛的/大概的/足够的
Penetrating/profound/ revealing/ remarkable/ proper/ thorough
入木三分的/ 深刻的/ 发人心省的/ 出色的/ 正确的/ 彻底的
Original/ unique/fresh/ rare/ clear/ fascinating/ interesting
独到的/ 独特的/ 新鲜的/ 少有的/ 清楚的/ 生动的/ 有趣的
Significant/substantial/ considerable
常用的负向形容词
Unethical/ immoral/unscrupulous/ unprincipled 不道德的
Antisocial/unacceptable/ undesirable 反社会的/不能接受的/令人不快的
Aggressive/ criminal/disruptive/ violent 挑衅的/犯罪的/扰乱的/暴力的
Notorious/ appalling/vicious/ bloody 臭名昭著的/令人震惊的/令人发指的/血腥的
雅思写作范文:垃圾成因及如何减少
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
I think it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, such as processed food. But even if we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping home.
The reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more on a daily basis than families did in the past. Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaged or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the supermarket, and then at home.
However, the amount of waste produced is also a result of our tendency to use something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce. We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.
I think, therefore, that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.
With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce. Certainly nobody wants to see our resources used up and our planet poisoned by waste.
雅思写作范文:如何对待犯罪分子
Topic:
Should criminals be sent to prison or should they do something else as a punishment? Explain your opinion and give your reasons.
sent to a jail:
The world would be in great chaos and full of blood and violence. It is the best deterrent to crime. They will think twice before they commit a crime. The decline of crime has a direct correlation with the implementation of the practice. It serves a just reward for the heartless and merciless malefactors while a great spiritual comfort to the victim’s family. The abolition of the practice will send out a misleading message that anyone can kill and get away with it.
I am in favor of the former view that we should retain the time-honored catholicon to ensure a safe and comfortable living environment to all these law-abiding citizens. An old saying best expresses my attitude:“Mercy to the criminal many be cruelty to the people.”
make up for, dangerous
It is hard to guarantee that they have really repented of their crimes. If it turns out (结果发现) that they just pretend they repent and start anew and actually they commit crimes again, the loss and the damage to the victims will be irreparable. And also, if the police want the behaviour of the criminals to be under control, they have to spend money and time in supervising the criminals after they are set free. Furthermore, once the criminals commit crimes again, it will take the police much trouble to catch them.
It is a great deterrence for many potential criminals. Compared with the deprivation of freedom, letting the criminals do something else as punishment is too mild.
It makes the violent robber think twice before pulling the trigger(扣动扳机).
Otherwise, it will send out a misleading message that anyone can kill and get away with(逃脱处罚)it.
do something else:
economical, lessen the prison crowding and thus cut down on government budget,
The practice of sending criminals to jail can not scare off the would-be criminals. Up to now, there is no evidence showing the direct correlation between the practice and the decline of crime. We should offer the offender a chance to mend his way and take over a new life.
Anyone who is guilty of a crime, offender, criminal, killers and rapists, malefactor, villain, evildoer
The imprisonment has a limited role to play in eliminating crimes.
be unsociable and lack working skills, ignorance of the new knowledge, cannot survive in the brand new society, which changes and develops everyday
share their criminal experience
reclamation, reclaim
out of pulse(出于冲动), regret, be not born evil
If given an opportunity to remedy their faults, they would appreciate and cherish it.
They would not feel discriminated or exclusive by society.
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