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雅思写作中常见10类连接词错误

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今天小编为童鞋们介绍中国学生最常用也是最常错的10个连接词和表达,希望童鞋们在雅思作文中避免此类错误出现。

雅思写作中常见10类连接词错误

雅思表达常见错误1:on the other hand一般引导对比的东西,不等于besides, furthermore, secondly

例子:Many young people enjoy online shopping. on the one hand, it saves time.On the other hand, it saves money.

评讲:save time和save money 是两个并列的有点,没有对比的关系,最好用firstly, secondly。

雅思表达常见错误2:on the contrary以为是In contrast的替换词

例子:The birth rate rose. On the contrary, the infant mortatality ratedropped.

评讲:on the contrary 一般出现的语境是前面出现否定信息。这个词组基本上不用于雅思作文。

雅思表达常见错误3:while, whereas认为是in contrast的替换词

例子:The birth rate rose. While the infant mortatality rate dropped.

评讲:while 是从属连词,要连接两个独立的句子,这里应该是“,while”或者改成“in contrast”

雅思表达常见错误4:besides, furthermore, what’s more, moreover, inaddition被认为是“递进”的连接词

例子:Many people today choose to study in foreign countries. Besides, theycan gain qualifications in foreign universities.

评讲:besides一般引导两个并列的观点,不指代因果关系,这里应该是“because ofthis”比较合理。很有意思的是,有一次我上课问学生什么是“递进”,举个中文的例子给我看,竟然没有学生能够举出恰当的中文例子。可见很多学生学习都是人云亦云,对一些概念其实根本不理解。

雅思表达常见错误5:however被认为是on the other hand的同义词

例子:Working from home has benefited many people. However, it can causeproblems.

评讲:however一般是转折关系,也就是后面的句子意思往往代表作者的首要立场。而on the otherhand一般是并列关系,也就是前后句子或者观点没有轻重之分,是并列的,一般是两个事情的对比,而不是转折。

雅思表达常见错误6:by doing this, in this way被认为是as a result, therefore, as aconsequence 等

例子:Many people work long hours. By doing this, they may suffer poorhealth.

评讲:一般by doing this, in thisway都是用在人们有计划地做某个事情,最后为了达到一定目的,或者效果。那么,显然不可能后面出现不好的结果,譬如说poor health。因此在这里用as aresult最好。

雅思表达常见错误7:as a result, therefore, thus, as a consequence 都是连接词,而不是连词

例子:many people today prefer to use mobile phones to communicate with theirfriends, as a result, the face-to-face contact declines.

评讲:as a result类似于副词,没有连词的功能,所以前面要用句号或者;号

雅思表达常见错误8:thereby 不是therefore的替换词

例子:Many libraries have Internet connection now, thereby, people can doresearch online.

评讲:thereby的习惯用法是thereby+doing something, 不能违反这个规则,千万不要以为thereby用了比therefore高大上

雅思表达常见错误9:in order to 一般是表示有目的地去做某个事情,要注意逻辑主语,而且一般不会用否定

例子:Governments should not invest in the arts, in order to save money.

评讲:这个句子用否定读起来很不通顺,用governments should cut down on the spending on the arts,in order to save money.

雅思表达常见错误10:with如果加名词,往往是表示“有了…”,后面一般不加负面的东西

例子:With pollution, many people will have health problems.

评讲:pollution是不好的东西,用with很怪异,用because of好一点

常见雅思写作高分句型

见的两种。

雅思写作高分句型一, 定语从句。

这应该算是雅思写作中最常用的一种句型之一,适当地运用定语从句可以给你的文章增色不少,也是一个能使大家雅思写作拿高分的必备句型。

例如,下面的这两个句子用上定语从句马上就变成了一个漂亮的复杂句。

Bad books contain evil thoughts. In them, there might be much description about violence, superstition, and sex。

→ Bad books, in which there might be much description about violence, superstition, and sex, contain evil thoughts。

雅思写作高分句型二, 状语从句。

在雅思写作高分句型当中运用的最多的是以下五种状语从句,即原因状语从句,让步状语从句,条件状语从句,时间状语从句和目的状语从句。

1. 原因状语从句:常由because, as, since和for引导

Eg: Nonetheless, I am still in favor of space travel, for its merits far outweigh demerits。

尽管如此,我还是赞成太空探险,因为它的好处远远大于坏处。

2. 让步状语从句:常由although, though, even though/ if, as long as和notwithstanding引导

Eg: Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place。

尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。

3. 条件状语从句:常由if, on the condition that和providing that引导

Eg: If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions, you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared。

假如你要取得成就或要实现你的雄心壮志,你必须努力工作、艰苦奋斗、准备好条件。

4. 时间状语从句:常由when和while引导

Eg: When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study。

说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

5. 目的状语从句: 常由so that和in order that引导

Eg: Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market。

成千上万的人们不得不花费更多的精力和时间学习新的技术和知识,使得他们在就业市场能保持优势。

有效学习雅思写作高分模板

雅思写作观点选择类型的题目:

A or B ,which one do you agree with? Give specific reasons for your answer。

(A,B 表示供选择的两种观点。Do C 指题目中提及的某件事情。如:some people prefer A in order to Do C。)

观点选择类型的雅思写作模板:

模板一:

As for the question that which is better, A or B, different people have different opinions. A has its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many disadvantages。

In my point of view, I would prefer B. First of all, (1) 支持 B 的原因之一。

For example, (2) 举例说明支持 B 的原因之一。

Another reason is that (3) 支持 B 的原因之二。

The third reason, however, goes this way: (4) 支持 B 的原因之三。

So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that (5) 重申观点。

模板二:

Some people believe A, they point out the fact that (1) 人们支持 A 的原因。However, other people believe B. They hold that (2) 人们支持 B 的原因。

As far as I’m concerned, I prefer A. As we all know (3) 我支持 A 的原因之一。

I remember (4) 举例说明。

In addition, (5) 我支持 A 的原因之二。

On the other hand, (6) 从反面论证 A 的优势。

Last but not least, (7) 我支持 A 的原因之三。

As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A ,such as (8) 举例说明 A 的劣势。But these can be compensated by its advantages。

模板三:

There are two different views on the matter of DOING C. Some people believe that (1) 支持的观点 A。

By this , they argue that (2) 进一步阐述观点 A。

For example,(3) 举例说明。

Others hold, on the other hand, that (4) 反对的观点 B 。

Furthermore,(5) 进一步阐述观点 B。

For instance,(6) 举例说明观点 B 。

Considering the views on the two sides, I prefer to put weight to the pros rather than cons. personally, (7) 我支持 A 的原因。

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