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雅思写作进阶指南

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  雅思写作到了瓶颈期,该怎么提高分数呢?下面小编给大家分享雅思写作进阶指南,适用于已经掌握了基础写作想要更上一层楼的同学们。

雅思写作进阶指南1

  雅思写作一个月从五到七的经验

  雅思考了两次,一月之间写作提了一分,第一次备考脑洞比较大,还残留着高中题海战术+坚持不懈就能首战过的想法,现在回头看看,真是too young too simple,2战终于分手,第二次调整了一下备考方案之后每天花的时间少了,分数却提了很多把自己这一个月的心路历程分享,希望大家也能快点摆脱雅思~!!

  说一下我的背景吧,老牌211 985工科生,多年不碰英语四六级低空飘过,不过高考120+底子还是有一点的,目标是6.5

  第一次备考每天都至少留3个小时复习雅思,当时写作跳的坑是这几个

  坑1:写作狂背顾X北词伙1h:坑2:每天写一篇大作文+一篇小作文坑3:套用新X方雅思教师写作模板

  就酱紫过了三个月,,,,,然后L6R7W5S6。。。说好的特别好呢 呵呵,,,说好的神一样的顾X北写作词伙

  之后低沉了好几天,啥都不想做,但是无奈连着报了两次,几千大洋啊,不说了,说多了都是泪。 后来静下心来,也问了很多人(感谢陪我一起烤鸭的小伙伴,还有一直无私回答我问题的小伙伴,感受到了家庭的温暖呀TAT),才发现了自己之前的几个做法有点问题首先:X北用的人太多了,都又老又旧了,考官的眼睛是雪亮的,一些所谓的高大上词伙prolong ,make it adj for sb to do,他们看到都想吐了,其实一点朴实一点的词语不影响分数的;

  然后,我写的作文,都没有找人改过,就是写完看了一下范文觉得哇哇哇作文写得真好啊然后,但实际上根本没有思考过自己的问题在哪里,怎样可以写的和他们一样好;

  最后写作不要随便套模板写作不要随便套模板写作不要随便套模板尤其是开头套模板,如果你的分数要求是6分以下,那你大胆的套吧

  如果想上6分或7分甚至更高,就不要用那么多的模板,其实根本没用,反而会让你分数低。。。

  为啥呢?转一句在某瓣看到的话:考官其实不是讨厌那些模板,他们反感的是高级的模板与你写的文章的语言水平根本不是同一个层次的,写出来的一篇文章里层次相差太大。想想看,读一篇中文的作文,如果每段的开头结尾转折的地方都用些华丽丽的词、文言文、诗句什么的啊,但是接下来却是用最普通易懂的语言,你看了会怎么想呢?如果你是模板党,常年6分,还不知道自己为什么跪的,那现在你可以瞑目了

  第一次屠鸭的悲剧让我意识到,写作脑中无结构,什么单词什么预测都是浮云,所以每天不再花1h背单词了,转而开始学习梳理写作结构;下面内容有点长,但都是我觉得最重要的内容,每一个字都是我的血汗啊!!!请不要嫌我啰嗦啊拜托!!!!

  包括这一个月中:每日作文备考,我做了啥大作文经验小作文经验相关备考资源补充tips雅思写作评分标准

  1. 每日作文备考,我做了啥

  每日写一篇大作文+小作文(题目来自剑4~剑10)看雅思范文+解析

  2. 大作文经验

  大作文我头最大的是这两个问题:

  问题1:写作没思路,速度慢

  一开始我总觉得思路打不开,写大作文就像挤牙膏一样痛苦,一句一句的挤啊。。。然后常常超时(建议大家写大作文的时候养成计时的好习惯,把时间控制在40min左右)

  没有思路的原因是一来脑子没料,二来练得不够我指的练不够不是指我的作文写得不够,第一次考完的时候作文已经写了整整一本了,但是却没有什么卵用,盲写其实并不能很好的帮助写作提速,因为没有养成一个良好的思维习惯,每次都是漫无目的的凑句子;培养一个习惯性的万用思路,然后围绕着这个思路针对各种题材联系,让它可以应对各种标题;要是你完全不知道用什么思路,可以参考一下范文

  来说一下我的思路基本是这样的:

  开头就是先描述这个现象,然后说说它的原因,再接着是利和弊,分两段,利和弊中间的过渡可以装得纠结一点,两者之间透露出你的立场,像(While I admit that,,, I am convinced that ...)外加给些solution,无非就是政府介入,raise awareness什么的,最后来个欢快结个尾,两句话以上。

  脑子里的料的话,只能靠积累了,有童鞋和我强力推荐经济学人,有空就读一读,有时间的同学非常建议这么做!!读精了,会很加分!当然,平时的那些reading也都是可以拿来学习的,句式啊什么的,甚至,雅思阅读里面的文章也可以借鉴的,只要心中有雅思,就处处是雅思哈哈~

  但是当时备考时间只有一个月了,所以就只是看了剑桥的范文看(网上有个叫大漠的把剑1-7的范文全都罗列出来)。

  7.5的,7分的sample也是可以看看感受一下的啦~分低的就不要去瞄了,不吉利喵~~

  问题2:容易跑题

  审题很重要!!!!!你写的再好跑题跑到西伯利亚了也是扯谈啊!!!!!记得第一次考的时候本来是要写科技发展是positive还是negative,当时时间没有控制好,顾不上列大纲了冲上去就开始写,写着写着就开始论证父母该不该让孩子玩高科技,出来之后我就觉得自己跪了。如果你连题目都看不懂的话,我教不了你审题,还是乖乖恶补单词吧,但是正常情况下,列一个大纲就可以切掉审题的问题,不用太详细,结合你自己的万用思路:

  思路是骨头,你的大纲就是肉~对照着,一项一项的填进去,就可以了!!!像酱紫列一个能清楚表达你思路的大纲,不会超过两分钟滴~

  切记:时间不够就急匆匆乱写是大忌,结果思路是散的,写的慢不说还容易跑题,而且还会影响后面答题的心情!

  3. 小作文经验

  小作文的练习,不能写完就算了,要参照范文总结思路,小作文去来去去都是那几种类型,实在不行,就每一种都参照范文来写思路,不要抱着侥幸的心理欧,第一次懒得看流程图,和地图。。。然后悲剧地被考到了。。。哈哈哈。。。我总结了一下:

  3.1单图题(一个图的小作文小心字数不够,用长点的句子,描述要完善):线图:主题段就写一段,尽量详细吧每个点都标清楚,拐点,极点,小趋势,总趋势可以最后总结。饼图:主题段开始表述由哪几个部分组成,然后可以按照大小(相似种类)分类描述比较(如bulk的和small portion的)。柱状图:分类,有时间的比较趋势。表格图:横向比较加纵向比较(比较时间随变化的趋势和同时间的特色点或极值)

  3.2组合图(两个图):基本表述方式和单个图一样,但是要抓最有特点的点和趋势,不然来不及,结尾段比较下两个的关系或者合理的原因。

  3.3流程图可以合理的分类(可以参照有个剑桥真题里的一个天气预报的流程图),然后用各种连词把每个流程都串起来(能改写原有的步骤尽量改写,但是不认识的专有名词一般不用)最后再整体合理总结一下流程(貌似有个什么蚕丝的真题就可以总结为制丝绸不是很复杂)。

  3.4地图题历史变迁类:跟流程图差不多,用好方位词,和描述建筑转换的词(rebuild,modify,expand,stretch等)。比较选址题:仔细看每个地址的特征,两个都要有一定描述再比较,用类似(proposed,prospective,potential site/location换着说可能的地址)。得出合理的结论即可。可以参照剑桥supermarket的选址比较题。

  4. 补充tips4.1作文最好找人改一改你要是不找人改的话很难知道自己的问题在哪里,毕竟当局者迷嘛~你自己看着蛮好的作文其实在别人眼里就是一坨_,而且也不用每一天都改,我一周改一篇大作文一篇小作文。如果你很有钱,可以报班或者找人批改,淘宝上一搜一大把;如果你像我一样节(qiong)俭(bi)可以厚着脸皮让身边的同学帮你改(还好身边一堆学霸),网上我也找到了免费的作文批改资源,蹭蹭更健康。4.2考前预测可以用来练手虽然很多人苦口婆心的说预测信不过,但因为当时觉得太没把握了,就还是看了预测

  写作,最重要还是多写!多写!!!!多写!!!!!方法都是亲身实践的,但对于很多看完这篇文的人来说,还是无效的。因为很多人也许看过之后,也许就写了2天作文,就开始该煲美剧煲美剧, 该lol的lol

  雅思写作进阶指南2

  注意细节,你的雅思写作会更高分

  在雅思写作中,有一个被广大考生所忽视,但是又对于整个分数的提高有实质性影响的部分,就是大作文开头段的写作方式。中文中有句话叫做“万事开头难”,英文中也有“The first impressions count”的说法,因此考生不应该对于这一部分轻敌,从而草草准备,或甚至是根本不去准备,等到考场上才见招拆招。这样一方面开头质量是没有一定的保证,另一方面对于基础较为一般的考生,往往完成开头段也会花费大量的时间,这样主体段的节奏和质量也就会受到影响。

  那我们研究开头段,第一个问题就是开头段是由什么组成的。开头段可以说是对于题目的一个最直接的回应,因此,一个开头段的组成基本是和题目的构成紧密相关的。而雅思大作文的题目构成主要分成两类,一类是和观点有关的题目,比方说“to what extent do you agree or disagree?”或者是“discuss both views and give your own opinion.” 这类题目的构成往往为“背景+题目观点+题目问题”。另一类是和事实有关的题目,比方说“do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?”或者是“what are the reasons and how to solve these issues?” 而这一类的题目中就只有“背景事实+题目问题”。

  所以, 我们的较为标准的开头段通常便是“背景引入+题目观点复述+己方观点表达”或是,“背景引入+己方问题回应”。

  因此我们在本篇先说一说开头段中的背景引入的方式。这个部分我认为应该是整个开头段从语言角度讲最重要的部分,最需要同学们的注意。

  一方面因为,学生往往会用较为随便或千篇一律的描述一笔带过,比方是“Nowadays, with the development of...”这样的老套话术,会给考官模板的感觉,也让考官对文章一开始就失去兴趣。另一个需要重视这一部分的重要原因是,这部分灵活度很强,也就是能更好的展现自己的英语实力。

  所以,比起简单的同意替换,我们可以把背景引入分为五大类:

  1 摆事实

  也就是通过对题目主题的理解,写一句对事实的描述,从而引出题目的话题或是问题。

  例:1. Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weakness. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?(Collins Unit1)

  There have always been differences in the types of work men and women have done...

  2. Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit2)

  The increasing availability of convenience foods has been a significant feature of modern life in many developed countries...

  3. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? (C4T4)

  Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

  4. In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. (C5T2)

  It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.

  2 给原因

  也就是根据题目中的观点或是题目中的事实去向前推出一层原因,从而让开头更有逻辑。

  例:1. As language such as English, Spanish and mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? (Collins Unit5)

  As the world becomes more integrated, the need for common means of communication is becoming more pressing.

  2. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (C6T2)

  As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.

  3 给结果

  通过对于结果的描述,向上推出题目论证的内容。这个方法思路较绕,但是用恰当也算是另辟蹊径。

  例:1. In the past, people spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays they change their job frequently. Please give your reasons and suggestions.

  Though the experience of moving from one job to another can sometimes be distressing or even traumatic, thousands of employees move from one job to another in rapid succession every year.

  2. Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today`s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What`s your opinion.

  It will be good news for school children when they are told that foreign language is no longer a required subject because translation can all be down by machines. ……

  4 时间对比

  这样的开头做法通常是将古今进行对比,从而引出题目的争论,或是主题。

  例:1. Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can social benefit from the contribution that older people can make?(Collins Unit9)

  People today can expect to live a longer and healthier life than people in the past. …….

  2. Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit10)

  In the past, news about famous people may have been confined to gossip columns in newspapers; these days it is not uncommon for celebrities to feature as front page news.

  3. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? (C9T1)

  Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists.

  5 地点对比

  例:Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (C8GB)

  Some countries have single-sex education models, while in others both single sex and mixed schools co-exist and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable.

  开头段的背景写作方式其实有很多很多种,只要是语言严谨准确,并且思路符合逻辑,都可以说是精品,就算是不写,只要是主体段精彩也没有任何问题。但是,这种背景的写作本身就是供考生展示自我英语水平的一个很好的平台。

  本篇所讲的开头方式一方面是帮助学生能够很好的完成这一任务,另一方面是让学生可以快速掌握快速应用,从而节省出发更多的时间去酝酿,雕琢主体段的写作,因为那些部分占分更高,更好的时间配置,才更可能获得更高的分数。

  雅思写作进阶指南3

  雅思写作一直是困扰烤鸭们的难题,大家虽然耗费了很长的一段时间在雅思写作上,但是效果却没有很好,那么今天为大家带来雅思写作高分技巧,希望大家能认真阅读学习。

  我们都知道雅思写作分为两个部分:TASK1 和 TASK2。TASK1需要在20分钟内完成,TASK2需要在40分钟内完成。下面就TASK2部分进行剖析,找到其提高技巧。

  首先看到一个写作题目,要对其进行分析,以确保其写作方向。千万不要写跑题了,或者背离文章的主题思想。这是雅思写作的第一步。

  例 如:Some parents in the United Kingdom decide not to have a television intheir home. They believe that, by doing this, their children will spend theleisure time more creatively. To what extent do you agree or disagree with thisdecision?

  当遇到这样一个题目的时候,我们应该先分析,然后确定自己的写作方向,是agree,disagree还是要二者兼顾。通常就是从这三方面来写,而不要把重点放到其他的地方。

  一般来说,雅思文章的结构通常就是:第一段:现象句+考题改写+本人立场,第二段:论证一(topic sentence +支持句),第三段: 论证 二(topic sentence +支持句) 第四段: 论证三(topic sentence +支持句), 第五段:总结段。

  这种写法与以前我们传统的议论文的写法几乎相同。在论证的过程中要做到论证的有理有据,内容要有深度,而非浅显的毫无说服力的文字。这是文章得高分得关键之一。

  例如这样一句话,说出来就没有任何意义:I like Hollywood movies because I like them. 相反,如果换个说法:I like Hollywood movies because its comedies attract me most. 这样说出来才有意义。通常在写文章得时候可以把考生分成两类,一类是遇到了一篇自己很熟悉的题目,写起来便滔滔不绝了,一发而不可收,控制不了自己。

  另一类则是无话可说,该说的话没的有说出来。我们不妨把作文的要求量化到每一个段落:一篇200词左右的作文一般不会超过15句话,把这15句话根据题目要求分配到各段中去,每一段大概只说那么几句话,绝不多说。

  事实上往往是说得越多,错误越多。因此,跟着提纲走,每一段不要写得太多,点到为止,见好就收,这才是最稳妥的对策。考生在平时的练习中可以训练自己快速列出提纲得能力,这是一个事半功倍得好方法,不仅可以帮你整理自己得写作思路,还可以训练你的快速反映能力。最主要的是提纲可以帮你清晰的把握文章的脉络,对于写作分数的提高很有帮助。

  在雅思写作中语言和句式的巧妙运用也可以为文章增色不少。 在写作时用简单的语言把复杂的意思表达出来可谓是伟大之举。

  对于一个一时找不着词的概念,应该用一种迂回曲折的方式把意思表达清楚。或用一个短语,或用一个从句,或三言两语,只要没出什么语言错误。雅思写作中有三个捷径,可以使文章更容易获得高分。

  他们是:倒装句,插入语,强调句。如果文章中出现几处这样的句子,相信考官对你的写作水平是会另眼相看的。要是文章看上去更加活泼,单一的陈述句是不够的,可以适当的穿插一些“修辞问句”,这样的文章看上去会更加灵动。

  例如:Firstly, in order to know itself better, a country needs to remember thepast. “Why we have these traditions? Why our culture and lifestyle are differentfrom other countries?” Those questions about us can only be answered by thehistory of the country. In addition, from the past, we can also learn lots ofthings. As old person always says “the past just like a mirror which can help usdo better in the future”. Indeed, from the failures and successes in the past,we can seek reasons, thus can avoid making similar mistakes.

  句子 “Why we have these traditions? Why our culture and lifestyle aredifferent from other countries?” 放在这一段落中是不是看上去更加活泼了。

  总之,熟悉雅思写作的出题思路,把握雅思的出题方向,掌握雅思的写作技巧,那么高分将悄然而至。

  雅思写作进阶指南4

  雅思写作--高分结尾总结句

  雅思作文结尾句型推荐:

  1)In short,it can be said that.。

  2)It may be briefly summed up as follows。

  3)From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that.。.

  4)in general/above all/with the result that/as a result/consequently。.

  5)As far as I am concerned/as for me, .。.

  6)This truth above seems to be self-evident。

  7)Whether we examine the above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone。

  8)In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B。

  9)I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ...but also to be...,both in...and in...。

  10) There is no doubt that。

  11) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to。

  12)To a large extent,..., therefore, reflects。

  13)If all above mentioned measures are achieved。

  14) Wherever you are and whatever you do, ...is always meaningful。

  15)So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it。

  16)Now, which one do you prefer-----the one...or the one...? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter。

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