3句话解答如何系统地准备雅思写作
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3句话解答如何系统地准备雅思写作
关于如何评价一篇雅思作文是好作文，3句话就可以了。首先你想对了(审题对了)，然后你写对了(没有语法和拼写错误)，最后他看懂了(表达准确)。很抽象对不对，那就举个例子：谈到远程工作的好处，首先就去写“节省车费”。
关于雅思写作题目想对了：
确实可以节省车费，那么上班的车费一般有多少呢?一个月100多人民币(起晚了打车四五十不是正常车费开销，尤其不属于大多数人的选择)。这个车费的数额，在国外同样不高。所以，是弱的论证。
那么，在写作文的过程如，这一点就不能作为一个主要的点来写，而应该当做次要、附带的点来写。
再举个例子：2017年5月6日雅思写作考题 Some young people commit serious crimes, such as robbery or violent attacks. Some people think they should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
young people包括：1) young adults: generally people in the age range of 20 to 39 (or 40)2) children，没有对young people的正确认识，这个题目就很难回答到点上。
关于雅思写作内容写对了
95%以上的考生对“写对了”的理解，都停留在“语法正确”或者“语法正确且翻译成汉语后正确”上。当然，这个标准是有意义的，它可以帮助考鸭达到雅思写作6分。(其实，考官要看懂6分的作文，基本都靠猜)
学生的备考心理是矛盾的：1. 写得那么普通，得不到一个好的分数;2. 考官要批改那么多作文，哪里有时间发现我的语法错误。能让1和2同时成立，那么考官必然要做到：总是能注意到作文中写得不普通的地方，又总是会忽略作文中的错误。(我选择微笑着离开)
关于雅思写作内容他(考官)看懂了
前提：大多数女生都留长发。结论：留长发的都是女生。读者应该能够判断，这个逻辑是错误的。
换一个前提，我们再来试试。前提：英国人使用的绝大多数英文都是语法正确的。结论：语法正确的英文，都是英国人使用的。这次，你会判断结论错误吗?如果结论是错误的(语法正确的英文，不都是英国人使用的)，那么什么是英国人使用的英文?你能找到答案吗?因为找不到答案，所以“语法正确的英文，都是英国人使用的
我们一起来看一些语法正确，但是英国人不使用(因此考官判断为错误)的英文。
学生在写作文时，写道：1) 护士需要 adjust to departments (适应各个部门)，因为护士要在医院的不同部分工作。而且医生也有自己的 treating habits (治疗习惯)，护士需要适应了才能提供好的协助。
另外还有
2) profound outcomes 深奥的(研究)结果
3) make achievements 得到成就
4) demand working specifications (我也不知道什么意思)
从语法上来讲
1) adjust to departments 正确，因为 to是介词，介词后面接名词 departments，合理;英文中有washing machine, dining room, reading comprehension，符合以上结构的短语 treating habits 自然就是合理的
2) profound outcomes 形容词+名词结构，合理
3) make achievements 名词+动词结构，合理
4) demand working specifications 动词+(现在分词修饰的)名词结构，合理
但是，这些都不是英文(只是英文单词)，都不是英国人会使用的英文，都是要被考官判断为错误的英文，都是要让考鸭在考试中扣分的英文。
想让考官看得懂，就要使用英国人使用的英文。道理就是这么简单。
有了对以上3点的分析，如何系统准备雅思写作，答案就有了。
1. 多看题
2. 多想思路
3. 多看题目解析
4. 提升思考的能力
5. 掌握全套语法知识
6. 掌握各个话题的词汇
7. 把你的作文当做英文来审阅
1. 多看题：这样可以发现出题的规律，但是考试回忆的题目，很多错漏，需要找到其中的错误。
2. 多想思路：多看题目解析理出自己的一套答题思路，减少考试中思考的时间。但是自己想的不一定是对的，需要发现错误并改正。
3. 看题目解析：吸收别人好的想法，纠正或者改善自己的想法，弥补自己的不足。不过，别人想的也不一定是正确的，所以还需要找到优秀的解析。
4. 提升思考的能力：推荐书籍《批判性思维》，有中文版，有电子书，只需要看其中举例讲解的部分，2个小时可以看完。
5. 掌握全套语法知识：虽然语法对了，英国人不一定看得懂，但是完全没有语法的句子，英国人看懂的可能性微乎其微。另外，针对写作的语法学习，不能停留在“了解语法现象”的基础上，而应该是能够运用。
举个例子：新闻揭露犯罪。(如果你知道expose)Some news exposes frauds.
如果让你用“主系表结构”来写这个句子呢?
1) Some news is about frauds.
2) Frauds are the topic/focus of some news.
这是会运用语法的考鸭能够做到的。
6. 掌握各个话题的对应词汇：注意，光记得单词没用，因为写作不是词汇考试，关键是你得将单词写到到句子里，表达出英国人看得懂的意思。举个例子。risk 冒险，你会用吗?“冒着受伤的风险”，怎么表达?take the risk of getting hurt
7. 把你的作文当做英文来审阅：这种事儿靠自己基本上是不可能做到的，可以找英国人帮你看。
1. 对于小作文无法快速构思的同学：就常见的雅思小作文常见精典题型的文章框架、数据的详略安排和比较有系统的梳理，做到拿到一道题就能快速构思框架,以下是推荐用来做此练习的小作文题目：
构思结束后如果有不确定的，可以参考范文(如果真题上又考官范文的话，当然请注意范文的框架不一定就是唯一最好的，有疑问的可以直接问老师)。
2. 大作文容易离题、偏题的同学：对题目的理解错误或者不到位会影响到审题出现偏差进而导致离题或偏题，建议大家可以挑选一本市面上的雅思范文素材(如《十天突破雅思写作完整真题库与6-9分范文全解》)，先读题，自己尝试进行点的构思，再将自己的想到的点和范文中的进行对比;
构思分论点过程中可以套用以下句式来保证逻辑性：我认为高中生应该参加社区义务劳动(支持的观点)，因为这能使他们有机会更深入地了解社会(分论点)。
如果这个句式不成立，那请三思你想的分论点是否有离题的嫌疑。
3. 对于大作文想不到点的同学：针对这点老师在课堂上会讲解一些方法，如分类法、对想法、万能法等，这些方法能在短期内较高效地帮助大家拓展思路和梳理分论点，但如果想要真正地坐到游刃有余，平常的积累是必须的。如果时间允许，希望考生平常能就常见的几大话题进行分论点的梳理。
举个例子，拿政府类话题讲，考生手中最好有这类题型的常见真题，可以通过阅读范文，或者关键词搜索英文网页(_的同学首选Google，不能_的凑活着用必应)，阅读相关材料的方法，推荐的网站有：The best answer to any question(英文版的知乎),idebate.org(议论文素材搜集),TED: Ideas worth spreading (视听材料：TED演讲视频，官网上有关于各个关键词的小标签)，News, sport and opinion from the Guardian's UK edition | The Guardian 卫报等一些主流媒体的网站。
阅读过程中可以做两件事：
1.摘录有用词汇、表达、句型，请注意甄别词句的风格是否够正式、学术;
2.可以利用思维导图等进行思路拓展。
3.有条件的话可以邀请一同备战的考生一起进行头脑风暴、挑选和组织分论点。
4. 对于词汇表达匮乏、容易出错和使用不准确地道的同学：
很多学词汇量较大的学生常常阅读能拿到令自己较满意的成绩，但是每每动笔就感觉词汇量匮乏，因为很多词只停留在认知的阶段，还没被“激活”。那怎样才能有效激活词汇呢?最方便的方法当然是每次都有老师直接给你把俗烂的表达替换成更准确地道的表达，但是这大概只有极少数在VIP学生能享有的服务，而且这种方法无法增强学生学习的独立性，那么自己在家该如何提升自己的Lexical resource呢?
a.词的替换：
在word中进行写作-选中需要进行替换的词-右键-同义词。当然很多电子字典或在线字典也有同义词词典的功能，如，mac版自带的Oxford Thesaurus of English就有这一功能;
b.词的搭配：
很多同学在写作的时候会发现对很多词的搭配不确定，有时候没办法就凑活写上去了，这时推荐两个在线词汇搭配网站:
普通版(user-friendly)：
http://oxforddictionary.so8848.com the English Collocations Dictionary online
词汇量和词法够牛的同学：http://prowritingaid.com/free-online-collocations-dictionary.aspx
5.对于语法错误较多的同学：
a.如果自身语感很好或语法已经掌握得很好，却常常因为不够细心而出现小的语法错误的同学，建议平常掐时间练习，并养成检查的好习惯;
b.对照以下的语法小错误清单，提醒自己，逐条校对，尽量做到接近零错误：
1)可数名词单数是否赤裸裸?
2)三单是否注意?
3)词性是否明确?(to do/doing?)
4)时态是否明确?
5)存在句型(there …)的简单句中是否又出现了谓语动词?
6)主被动是否正确?
7)标点是否正确?(which从句和分词短语等作状语时是否需要用逗号隔开)
8)另外，一同备考的考生之间也可以进行peer correction，很多时候同伴总能看到自己看不到的错误，而且通常大家都是很擅长“找茬”的 J
2.对于语法错误较多，且自身经常无法判断正误的同学：
好好学语法。(除非你有大把的光阴和绝佳的英语环境允许你培养出优越的语感)
6. 对于想要句式多样(Grammatical Range)的同学：
注意再追求句式多样性的同时要避免另一个极端，避免出现句意的累赘、冗长甚至错误，或者不能很好的做到上下文的衔接(Coherence & Cohesion)。
雅思大作文范文：解决能源危机
能源危机是指因为能源供应短缺或是价格上涨而影响经济。这通常涉及到石油、电力或其他自然资源的短缺。能源危机通常会造成经济衰退，是一个全球性问题。下面来看一下关于这个话题的雅思写作范文。
There is nothing unusual about energy like coals and oils being consumed, principally because economic development depends on natural resources all the time. But what is happening today is extraordinary judged by the standards of the past. It is energy depletion on a massive scale and this problem is so knotty that should deserve our closer heed.
Amongst the diverse factors contributing to the energy crises around the world, government’s short-sighted policies and citizens’ extravagant use of automobiles are probably the two most significant ones. By presuming on their natural resources, quite a few countries, especially developing ones, are eager to develop their economy in order to gain an edge over their rivals. Admittedly, their intensive use of the energy facilitates, to some extent, the developments of other industries in short term. Additionally, the amount of private cars increases at such a breakneck speed that the petroleum used amounts to an intimidating proportion of the natural resources.
The consequences are undoubtedly disastrous for human beings. Although countries can boast their growth of GDP, their citizens have to endure the ever deteriorated environment with stinking gas belching from factories and vehicles, polluted water due to fuels infiltrating underground, even ultraviolet radiation in the absence of ozone layer and, therefore, their quality of life is by no means improved. Also, sustainable
development can never come into true in this situation, meaning that our descendants can benefit nothing except sterile land and polluted air and water from their ancestors.
Therefore, our government must take serious steps to attack those problems. The first and foremost is that governments have to reverse their mindset and no longer deem the growth of GDP their first goal. Rather, the betterment of citizens’ quality of life should deserve more attention than the economic growth. Furthermore, the use of private cars should be discouraged by authorities, who must shoulder the responsibility of improving public transportation in order to facilitate people as well as release the burden of energy consumption.
In conclusion, to avoid the phrase “filthy rich” added to themselves, countries must pay more heed to the efficient use of their energy and the issue of environmental protection, while they develop their economy; otherwise, environmental apocalypse and energy crisis are feared to happen in the horizon.
雅思大作文范文：电脑与现代教育
写作题目
Are computers an essential feature of modern education? What subjects can be better taught using computers? Are there aspects of a good education that cannot be taught using computers?
题目解析
Topic words
Computers Essential features / absolutely necessary
Modern education / good education
Task words
There are no specific task words. Three separate questions are given.
Questions I should ask myself
Do I think computers are essential for education? What subjects do I think are best be learnt using computers? What do I think are the features of a good education, and are computers important in it?
The answer must
Answer each of the three related questions. If you answer the second and third question you will answer the first question, which is the most general and gives the basic topic of the essay. Show which subjects can benefit from the use of a computer, and explain why a computer is so useful. Show what cannot be taught by computer, and explain why a computer cannot help with those areas. After explaining when computers are useful and when not, write a compulsion in which you say whether computers are essential in education or not, using arguments from your essay.
雅思写作范文
Introduction shows main idea
Computers are now essential in many areas of life – modern banking, retail and information exchange among others. However, this is not true for education. At a simple level some subjects may be better taught using computers, but to explain important concepts a human teacher is still indispensable.
Why computers do well, with examples
There are some subjects in which a computer can be used successfully to teach. Elementary mathematics, elementary language leaning, any area which requires a student to memorize basic facts through repetition is well suited to computer learning. The computer can be programmed to provide an endless number of simple questions, and as the student answers these questions the facts are learned and reinforced.
What computers cannot be, with an example
However, in the learning and practice of more complex ideas, the computer is not adequate. A computer can evaluate an answer as right or wrong, but it cannot determine why. It cannot find out why a student is making mistakes, and then re-present important concepts in a different way so the student will understand. It cannot determine at what stage in a mathematics problem the student has made an error, it can only indicate that the final answer is wrong. Tasks involving reasoning cannot be taught by computers, as there are too many variables for a computer to deal with successfully.
Conclusion re-states main ideas
Thus, while computers may be useful as a tool for practicing simple skills, they are not an essential feature of modern education, because they cannot monitor a student's grasp of concepts, nor evaluate a student's reasoning. Until further developments in computers are made the human teacher will remain indispensable.
雅思大作文范文：建筑物
在雅思写作中，关于建筑物的话题也出现过，当设计一个建筑时，最重要的是考虑它的内在用途而不是它的表面，对这种说法，你同意还是不同意呢?
写作题目
When designing a building, the most important factor is inside use of the building rather than its outside appearance. Do you agree or disagree?
Which is more important, function or appearance? This has always been a hot topic for so many years.
范文
As people are becoming more and more practical, they pay great emphasis on functions of things. But when people are satisfied with material life, they have spiritual requirement. And aesthetics is one of their pursuits.
The basic requirement of a building is its inside use. No one buys a house that he cannot live in only to appreciate its appearance.
As I have said, modern people are practical, so we never do things that cannot benefit us. But with the new techniques and advanced tools, up until now, human beings have no problem to construct a building to satisfy our practical use, thus in this sense, on the basis of usefulness, we have a higher requirement of beautifulness.
That’s why our world has become more and more beautiful.
But it also depends on different cases. Buildings used for exhibition should not be the same with those used for residence. Great buildings for exhibitions or used as museums are art works themselves and worthy of our appreciating.
The most famous is Sydney Theatre. Many people visit it for its great beauty rather than enjoying concerts.
If the building is only for us to live in, then there is no necessity to invite a famous architect do design such an elegant house. Such buildings are also out of our purchasing power.
To sum up, the inside use and the appearance are both very important. But it doesn’t mean that we should always give the same weight to the two. It should depend on concrete occasions.
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