剑桥雅思14Test4雅思写作真题及范文解析

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　大家在备考雅思写作的时候可以找一些真题去练习，然后对照范文，找到自己的不足之处加以改进。下面小编给大家带来剑桥雅思14test4写作真题范文解析。

剑桥雅思14Test4雅思写作Task1真题及范文解析

　　TEST 4

　　WRITING TASK 1

　　You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

　　The plans below show a pubic park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

　　Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

　　Write at least 150 words.

　　【答案解析】

　　这是一道地点变迁类地图题，需要分析同一个公园在不同的时间(1920年和现在)的整体布局变化。地点变迁类地图题的整体写作顺序为第一张地图按照图片内容完整描述，从第二张图片开始重点描述图片之间的差异，即变化了的布局，没有发生变化的内容无需重点呈现。在这道题目中，整体分析顺序为自西向东(图片从左往右)，在大方向一致的前提下，需要关注1920年公园的西边(左边)为环状布局，音乐家演出台被四周的观众坐席和玫瑰花园环绕。中部的同样为对称布局，喷泉的北边和南边是对应的两个入口。公园现在的布局中，类似的对称结构也可以在中部观察到，玫瑰花园四周被座位环绕，北边和南边的入口不变。

　　The maps show changes in the layout of the Grange Park, which stands between the Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street in 1920 and today.

　　In 1920, a stage for musicians could be observed in the center of the western area, with two rose gardens built to its north and south respectively. There were both two seats areas facilitated on each side of the two rose gardens, surrounding the stage altogether. In the middle of the park, a fountain could be found, while two entrances on the Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street located to the north and south of the fountain. In the eastern area, another rose garden stood next to the entrance on the Arnold Avenue, opposing to a Glasshouse in the south. There was a pond for water plants standing in the northeastern corner of the park, next to which another seats area was founded.

　　At present, several changes have taken place. The stage for musician is transformed into an amphitheater for concerts, while four seats areas and the rose garden in the south are all moved to the center of the park, with four seats areas surrounding the garden. Another rose garden at the east of the entrance is changed into a café, while the pond for water plants is transformed into a children’s play area. A water feature area replaces the glasshouse in the southern direction. What is more, an entrance to the underground car park is established on the original site of seats next to the pond.

　　剑桥雅思14test4写作task2范文解析：个体经营的优缺点

　　WRITING TASK 2

　　You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

　　Write about the following topic:

　　Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.

　　Why might this be the case?

　　What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

　　Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

　　Write at least 250 words.

　　【答案解析】

　　这是一道变体的问题解决类大作文。常规问题解决类大作文的出题形式为分析问题产生的原因以及提出相应的解决方案，而这道题的写作要去为分析现象出现的原因以及相应的弊端，与常规问题解决类答题要求略有出入。但从题目本身而言，和问题解决类大作文相类似的地方是同样不用给出具体个人对于现象本身的利弊判断，因为题干中已经替考生决定了论述的方向“自主经营的弊端”，主体段按照两段式划分，一段分析为什么会出现越来越多的个体经营，一段分析这个现象可能会产生的弊端即可。

　　主体段1：

　　1)对于个人自由和自主性的追求。

　　2)对于个人抱负的追求。

　　主体段2：

　　1)承受更大的压力。

　　2)缺乏稳定性。

　　【参考答案】

　　Contemporary working modes have been gigantically reshaped under reforms of traditional concepts as well as increased social demands. As can be prevalently witnessed in many cities, especially metropolises around the world, an increasing number of people are becoming self-employed. Both the causes and possible negative influences will be further discussed in following paragraphs.

　　Various reasons can contribute to the present situation. First and foremost, the pursuit of personal ambition and dream has motivated people to escape from the shackle of ordinary companies. In traditional working modes, employees have to strive really hard to climb the career hierarchy, while they may spend more than half of their life to improve their status. By being the employers of themselves, people can spare no efforts to realize their own dreams. What is more, with the awakening of democratic consciousness, people nowadays are more aware of the personal freedom. In such contexts, many of them would not like to be constrained by the routine commuting life, and would rather hold the decision-making power at hand. Hence being self-employed gradually becomes one of the most favorable choices for people who value personal freedom. Under the influences of aforementioned elements, the emergence of such a phenomenon is quite understandable.

　　In terms of the possible disadvantages, on the one hand, people who are self-employed may face certain periods of instability. Compared to regular companies and enterprises, the client resources of those individual employers are quite unsteady, since those individual employers should take more efforts to establish a convincing image and reputation. Once the shortage of incomes occurs, people who are self-employed will confront tougher times to survive. On the other hand, more pressure will be exerted on shoulders of those individual employers. In order to maintain the healthy operation of business, people who run their own companies should strive against all odds no matter in competing with rival companies or managing their own employees. As a result, they must undertake stresses they will never face when they are employed by large companies. Without proper mental and physical regulation, their health might be further hampered under such an intense state.

　　The causing effects of being self-employed are quite diverse and it is really significant for people who want to be self-employed to think twice before making this decision.

　　雅思词汇：表达心情的英文词有哪些

　　embarrassed尴尬

　　ashamed惭愧

　　flustered慌张

　　guilty内疚

　　agony苦恼

　　heartbroken伤心

　　miserable悲惨

　　depressed沮丧

　　discouraged气馁

　　melancholy忧郁

　　jealous嫉妒