初中英语作文病句和错句修改

　　下面的英语句子都是出自<朗文国际>三册和四册的学生作文, 不是病句就是错句. 让我们用锐利的眼睛, 一起来找茬吧.

　　初中英语作文病句和错句修改

　　1. We have computer class one week a time.

　　2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.

　　3. There have 100 books.

　　4. I study there very happy.

　　5. I usually swimming there.

　　6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.

　　7. Several hours after, he was surprised.

　　8. He had to asked the other one.

　　9. He thought he speak well.

　　10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .

　　11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.

　　12. This film is very good-looking .

　　13. It is very good to family look.

　　14. I think we can’t live Internet.

　　15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.

　　16. I have a future dream.

　　17. It can help me to walk on my life road.

　　18. I think everything must be change a lot.

　　19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.

　　20. But I singing not very well.

　　21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.

　　22. Almost students use the computer not study.

　　23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.

　　24. When I was very small.

　　中考满分英语作文

　　根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文片段。所给词语必须都用上，中文提示内容不必逐句翻译，每组英文提示所写出的句数不限。

　　今天是6月23日，星期日，天气晴朗。你和你的同学张宏参观了北京动物园。那里的动物十分有趣，人见人爱。当你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物时，就上前阻止并说……

　　请你用英文写一篇日记，记述今天的经历。(请注意日记格式)

　　参考范文：

　　Sunday ， June 23rd Fine

　　It was a fine day today and the sun was bright . I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate ， Zhang Hong .

　　The animals there were so interesting that allthe people loved them . When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys ， I went / ran to stop him and said ，“ Animals are our good friends and we must take good care of them .”