2017山西中考英语写作范文_(2)
山西中考英语写作范文篇4
Ⅸ.书面表达(共15分)
81.(15分).向他人表达善意并帮助他人体现了一个人良好的品格.当你向被人表达善意并给他人提供帮助时，你希望得到回报(repay)吗?针对这一话题，九年级六班的同学们展开了辩论.
假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出2至3条理由来说服同学们(只需选择一方观点表达即可).
要求：1.词数不少于80词;
2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名.
When I show kindness and help others，I ________________________________________________________
When I show kindness and help others，I never expect them to repay me.(选择一方观点) In my view，helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happyness.On the other hand，everyone may get into trouble and need help，too.(说明理由)
Several days ago，while I was having a walk in the park，I found a little boy crying.(高分句型)Then I asked him what was the matter，and he told me he couldn't find his mom.Luckily，he remembered his mother's phone number.So I called her immediately.Ten minutes later，the boy saw his mom and became excited.His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift，but I refused.(高分句型)At that time，I felt quite happy because I did something really good.(举例)
All in all，the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay.If you wanted repay，a"Thanks"would be enough.(高分句型)(总结)
【点评】写图画作文时，首先要看懂图画所表达的内容，最好列一下提纲，然后根据提纲进行写作就不会造成离题或偏题，但要注意，文章必须要覆盖整个要点，行文要注意简化，不要拖沓冗长，要使用正确的句子，同时注意，要使用一定的连接词，比如：first，second，what's more，finally等.再者，在作文完成时要注意检查、修改，如果有时间可以先写到草稿纸上，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分.最后，注意使用一些句型和短语，使整篇文章意思连贯、流畅，方能成就一篇好的作文.
山西中考英语写作范文篇5
题目要求
学生综合素质评价的方式多种多样，同伴互评是其中较为有效的方式之一，它可以让学生不断体验成长和学习过程中的进步，并正确认识自我，保持自信。
某班一个小组正在进行阶段性同伴互评活动，如果你是该组组长，请结合本组讨论情况，为本组某位同学写一份激励性评价报告，内容须包含以下要点：
1. the skill / the advantage / the personal quality the student has
2. one thing the student did
3. some advice for the student
【要求】
1. 词数80词左右;
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名。
参考范文：
Han Mei is an easygoing girl who gets along well with everyone. She is also talented in performing. What’s the most important, she is warm-hearted.
Once she knew a girl in her neighbourhood had so serious an illness that a large amount of money was needed. She put forward a suggestion calling on all the kids to give away pocket money to the unlucky girl. Besides, she organized a charity show to raise more money. When the girl and her parents got the money, they were really moved.
Han Mei should also put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades.
参考翻译：
韩梅为人随和，跟所有同学相处得都很好。她在表演上特别有天赋。最重要的是，韩梅还是一个热心肠的姑娘。
记得有一次，当她知道邻家的女孩病得很严重，急需一大笔医药费时，她提议同学们募捐自己的零用钱，帮助这位可怜的女孩。此外，她还组织了一场慈善活动以期筹到更多的钱。当那位女孩和她的父母得到这笔捐助时，他们很受感动。
韩梅也应该投入更多的时间与精力在学业上，努力成为一名品学兼优的好学生。
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