高中英语书面表达题的专题和答案(2)
高中英语书面表达题的专题的答案
参考范文
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and you?ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection.I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
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Dear Bob,
How is everything going? I’m writing to express my regret at being unable to go to the bookstore with you next weekend,which I have promised.I feel terribly sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
What makes me concerned is my final exam which will be held two weeks later, so I have to make a preparation for it at that time.I hope you could appreciate that I must spare no effort to do well in my final exam if possible.Could we make another appointment to go to the bookstore together?
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Please let me know what time is OK for you.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3
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Dear__Jim,
Its great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.He,in his book,Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World),introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.That opened our eyes to the world.In fact,he inspires me to major in English in college,to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books!Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours,
Li__Hua
Writing
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The Season I Like Best
If someone asks me which season I like best,I can tell him without hesitation that spring is my favorite of the four seasons.
Two reasons may account for why I like spring best.In spring,the weather gets warmer and the days get longer.Everything begins to grow.Many kinds of flowers start to come out,which give the earth a pretty coat,making this world a better place to live in.Besides,I like to go camping in spring and I feel so refreshed in the surrounding of nature.I will forget all my bad moods when walking in nature.
Spring is my favorite season.
Writing 5
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Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
Writing 6
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I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have our article before June 28?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 7
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I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We'll also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon.
If you are able to come with us,please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.
Looking__forward__to__your__reply.
Yours,
Li__Hua
Writing 8
【思路点拨】
这是一篇话题类作文。要求根据引语写出对成功的理解。需要写的话题已经给出需要我们120词左右不要太多也不要太少。
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This__quotation__from__Winston__Churchill__tells__us__that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.Rather
At the age of twelve,I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However,it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still,I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice,I did better and better.Looking back,I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart.
Actually,we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick to it.
Writing 9
【思路点拨】
主题:“十年后的我”;
内容要点:家庭、工作、业余生活三方面。
段落层次:适当插入连接词使文章层次分
4.亮点说明:适当使用多种句式结构避免句式单一;恰当使用高级词汇避免尽用“儿科词汇”以增加文章亮点提高文章档次。
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n__the__future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own familyong well with my colleagues.I'll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time,I'll continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I'll travel around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.
Writing 10
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nsive or not.What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.
Years ago,I received a gift from a friend on my birthday,who is now living far away.It delighted me at the sight of it.It was a piece of paper cutting,a Chinese traditional art.With the gift,he included a letter,in which he told me that he had made the paper cutting himself.It took him several weeks to learn to make it.That's why I value it more than any other gift I received that day.
Now,it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom.Whenever I look at it,I couldn't help thinking of my friend.However far away we are,we feel close to each other.So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.
考点二 图画、图表类
Writing 1
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A week before Earth Day,posters were put up around our school,calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes,pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles,and turned those into dolls,handbags,tissue boxes and small vases.That weekend,we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.All were very happy with those unexpected gifts,especially little kids and elderly people.We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.
Writing 2
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本文是一篇图画作文用图画的形式展示了一个活动过程。写作时要认真审读四幅图画理清其内在的逻辑关系交代清楚活动的时间、地点、人物和活动的具体内容;同时运用恰当的过渡词把四幅图画的内容连成一个有机的整体。
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When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.
We hope we can have more activities of this kind!
【亮点点评】
本文注意使用了过渡词汇first等来衔接句子和段落使文章更有条理行文连贯。
时态把握准确主要运用了一般过去时文章上下文时态保持一致。
恰当运用了高级结构如非谓语动词 Looking at the figurines, ;定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table...;时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, 等让文章靓丽起来。
Writing
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本文是一篇漫画类作文要求根据图画展示内容写一篇120词左右的短文。
写作要点:1.描述图画(一般现在时)
概述其含义(取自中国古代成语“凿壁偷光”概述其内容并渗透“刻苦求学”的思想)
谈个人感想(根据这个成语想到自身如何去做)
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sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.
This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boyd even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house to read at night.The moral of the story is:spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.
se,things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.
【亮点点评】
本文简明扼要要点齐全信息丰富条理清晰。灵活运用了高级词汇如:shabby, 等体现出作者丰富的词汇积累能力。句型上运用了强调句型丰富了句式结构;最后一句起到了画龙点睛的作用是一篇上等佳作。
Writing
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书面表达部分属于给材料作文的类型提供了文字和图表相结合的三份材料要求考生在概要叙述材料的基础上分析导致交通问题的主要原因并从社会规范和个人行为两方面讨论自己得到的启示。
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l examples.
Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, s, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.
In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
【亮点点评】
文章要点全语法知识应用灵活且使用得当堪称佳作。文中开头就使用not only...but also 句式使行文非常连贯。高级词汇in spite of, 等强调句式虚拟语气的应用等都彰显了作者的扎实的英语功底。
考点三 应用类
Writing 1
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Dear Mr.Jenkins,
My name is Li Hua, and Im one of your students in the International Economy and Commercial Department.I’m writing to ask you for some help.
In order to earn some extra money and reduce my family’s burden, I’d like to go to a foreign trading company to find a part-time job in the coming summer vacation.Ive finished the application and personal resume.But I’m not sure if they are written well enough to catch their eye.Please refer to the attachments which include the application and resume.
I’d appreciate it if you could help me revise them.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing
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本文是一篇典型的邀请信重点是李华邀请美国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营要按照邀请信的格式进行写作即发出邀请介绍活动的时间地点内容参加原因等最后说明自己的期待和感谢。
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I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you'd like to go with me.
This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I'll send you more information.
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点评】
本文结构紧凑层次分明运用了邀请信的一些常用语如I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I wonder if you'd like to go with me.文中的时态把握较好使用了一般将来时和一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情。
Writing
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考查应用类作文。在写作时需要注意以下几个方面:首先需要审题。即:审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次考生要能够抓中心列要点列出写作提纲。写作文时一定要切题抓住中心紧扣要点.然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下考生应该选择自1、 2;第二段写要点3;第三段写要点4, 以及希望得到对方的回信。
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This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am quite interested in it.I think I'm fit for it.As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years.In addition,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.So I'm quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.
Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday.As the saying goes, practice makes perfect.Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese,see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes.Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.
In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward.It is just what I want.I'm eager to improve my English.So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.
Hope for your early reply!
Yours,
Li Xia
【亮点点评】
本文要点齐全结构完整。使用多种句式如定语从句:I am Chinese, ;表语从句:It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。
Writing
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I'm Li Jin, Chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang Middle School.Now I have a piece of good news to tell you.
Our school will donate 5,000 copies of different valuable books to your class, which include popular science books, classic works and so on.Popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way and they can help you understand science subjects better and arouse your curiosity about scientific discoveries.Classic works present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.They not only offer you joy and excitement, but also encourage you to think critically.
We will take these books to your school to take part in the summer camp in July this year.
If you have more needs, please let me know as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely
Li Jin
【亮点点评】
本文要点齐全较好地完成了规定的任务同时也应用了较多的语法结构和词汇包括不定式to tell you作后置定语非限制性定语从句which include...连接词and的灵活运用连接并列谓语引导的条件状语从句等。总之全文结构紧凑句际间连接顺畅是一篇难得的佳作。
Writing
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本文是一篇应用文要求根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。文章要求明确思路清晰是学生熟悉的话题。
写作要点:1.表达写信意图(申请“英语文化节”学生自愿者)
陈述应征目的(如:提高英语能力交流能力等)
说明应征条件(性格能力等方面)
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I'm__Li__Hua,a__student__from__Class__2,Grade__3.I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering,my service,I will be able to improve my organisational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates.Besides,I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【亮点点评】
本文要点齐全完全符合应征邮件的要求层次分明脉络清晰。开门见山地表达了写信的意图并对自己应征目的和应征条件分别进行了阐述同时在文章最后表达了自己的信心和愿望。文章中的by offering my service以及非限制性定语从句的使用都是文中的亮点所在organisational ability,communication skills,appreciate,live up to your expectations等高级词汇运用也体现了作者深厚的语言功底。总之是一篇不可多得的佳作。
Writing
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考查属于书信类作文。首先需要审题。即:审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次要列好提纲。一、表明写信目的:申请参加该活动(添加得知消息);二、选择一种分享方式:二者选
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organizing this activity to share books worldwide,I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.
You've introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release.Of the two,the latter wins my favor.By means of controlled release,I only need to deliver books to other participants,not only are books shared but also it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.
If you could provide more specific information,I would be well grateful.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点评】
本文要点齐全结构完整。使用多种短语和高级句式如not only...but also;build up;分词作状语:Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide;定语从句:I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading 等。
Writing
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内容要点:
参加为期六周的英语班
询问:
(1)课程开始时间、每周课时
(2)每班人数
(3)学费、住宿
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I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad,and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First?Besidesuld not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Writing 8
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I'm__Li__Jin,monitor__of__Class__One,Grade__Eleven.I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student.You're welcome to stay with us.
Our school is located in a northern city of China,where you can taste many kinds of delicious food,because it is well famous for its snacks.Our city witnesses four different seasons,plenty of sunshine and good rainfall,but in winter you may feel a little cold.
Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls,who are warm and generous and ready to offer help.They are very friendly and easy to get along with.You will have a good time and get used to the life soon.
Yours,
Li__Jin
Writing 9
【思路点拨】
本文是应用文写作写一篇欢迎词。
内容要点:
(1)欢迎
(2)活动介绍(目的内容等)
(3)祝愿
人称:代表学校欢迎国外代表团故应用第一人称I或者we。
时态:一般现在时
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On behalf of our school,I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.
As scheduled,we have English Talent Show today.The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.The programme consists of the following activities:recitation
Dear guests,you are welcome to take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.Thank you.
考点四 开放、半开放类
Writing 1
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On-line voting becomes increasingly popular,and many competitions get people involved in it.It is beneficial to some people,while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.
In my opinion,on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed,since it is no more than a way to participate in public life.It makes no difference from ordinary voting events,in which candidates go around to seek supports.In addition,the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient,regardless of time and space.Furthermore,voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.
To be honest,voters sometimes feel annoyed,not because they hate voting,but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.Therefore,I hold a positive attitude towards on-line voting.
Writing
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arn without questioning,in other words questioning is a bridge to learning or is the very beginning of learning.Take learning English for example,when we learn the meaning of the phrase “pick up”,our first reaction is what it means and how we can use it.Such a question keeps us going on learning.Then come the following questions: can we find a sentence where we can use it? Or can we find a dictionary to look it up? After the questions being put forward one by one,our actions go further and further,until we get a good command of it at last.So when you are beginning to learn something,don't be shy to ask questions,only with the questions can we have the inspiration to learn something new or do better than before.
Writing 3
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题材料作文作文的写作要点已经给出考生需要根据提示进行写作必须涵盖所有要点还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性不能出现与本人有关的信息。
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A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.
【亮点点评】
范文使用了一些重点句型:定语从句I would原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese...;宾语从句I could learn a great deal from him about it,②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained;条件状语从句If I could interview him;非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等显示了扎实的语法功底也使作文的句式变得多样化;范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语:not only...but also...;one of the...;the first to do sth, ;a great deal;such...as等使作文的内容得到了丰富;范文注意使用not only...but also, 和finally等来衔接句子使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。
Writing
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇开放式写作属于议论文的范畴。首先确定人称以第一人称为主表达1.首先明确自己的观点:坚持自己的观点还是尊重大多数同学的意见二者只能取其一。2.以具体事例阐述你这么选择的理由。写作时注意用词准确句际间连贯性要强使上下文衔接浑然一体。
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When I Have a Different Opinion
d choose to stick to it.By doing so,I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing.Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.We did have a good time that day.Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.
【亮点点评】
本文结构清晰要点全面层次清楚。写作中使用了较高级的词语为文章增色不少同时准确使用了复杂句子结构包括非谓语动词to deal with...等引导的时间状语从句引导的对比句引导的原因状语从句连接的并列结构等。
Writing
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my teacher before my classmates.
When I was young, I was very shy. I didn't dare to speak in public. When the teacher asked me to answer a question, I was always too nervous to answer it, which made me very sad.
One day, the teacher asked me to come to his office, where he told me to recite a text. I recited it fluently. The teacher praised me and told me I would recite it the next day before my classmates. I told him that I was too nervous, but he insisted that I should do it. The next morning, I was asked to recite the text that I had prepared. Although I did poorly, the teacher praised me very much. I was so proud of myself that day.
After that, I was frequently praised before my classmates and began to gain confidence. I tried even harder and the teacher praised me more. Eventually,I overcame my shyness. It was the teacher's praise that made me become a better student.
Writing 6
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I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car,which drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation.Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.Compared with the escaped driver,I am proud of what I did.
As a member of the society,I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
Writing 7
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Where there's a will,
I can't agree more with the view.In our daily life,we will face all kinds of challenges and difficulties.As long as we possess a strong will to get through such hurdles instead of running away from them,we will possess success and a brilliant future.
Take myself for example.I was born in a poor family,and my parents are both laid-off workers.I do cherish the educational opportunity my parents offer to me and I always adopt the motto—“Where there is a willstudy around the clock to prepare for the College Entrance Examination.Through my constant efforts,I believe I can change not only my own fate but also the worrying situation of my family.
Therefore,I firmly believe that our future depends on a strong will.
Writing 8
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;my phone fallsriends.Moreover,it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.
Personally,it is completely wrong of him to behave with such an attitude towards others and life.As a matter of fact,none of us can live alone in society.We all depend on others sometimes to some degree.If everyone does and thinks as he does,he'll not live any longer in the world.
I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need.Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble.Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.That is what the saying goes:“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.
Writing 1
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Dear Thomas,
Im so thankful to you for your kindness and help in the oral English training course. My spoken English has greatly improved owing to the effective training program,during which I made many new friends.
I used to be shy and untalkative. When staying with my classmates,I tried to communicate with them in English,but I often made mistakes. Whenever I met with native speakers,I had a strong willing to practise English,but I wasnt brave enough to open my mouth,which worried me for a long time. Luckily enough,your training course smoothed away all the difficulties. I have benefited from it.
Now,Im glad to learn you are to organize more training courses,and I hope I can get your advice on how to improve my writing. In short,Im looking forward to more new things in our future courses.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Writing 2
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Dear__Sir,
I__am__Li__Hua.__I__am__writing__to complain about one of your bus-drivers improper and rude behaviors.
Last Sunday, I was taking a bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention. What’s worse, he drove even faster. Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance. However, he didn’t apologize but said rudely “It’s none of your business.”
I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.
Yours__sincerely,
Li__Hua
Writing 3
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I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It’s never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.
First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
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Dear Dr Dan,
Im writing to ask for some information about your school and how to become admit to your university.
As a senior 3 girl, I have always been considering going abroad for further studies, which I suppose will benefit me greatly in the long term. I’m an outstanding student and good at physics and biology, including English of course and I hope to grasp this opportunity to realize my dream.
What puzzles me is that I don’t know the exact time for the test and interview, and also I am confused about what to be prepared for the test. Besides this, I will greatly appreciate it if you could introduce me something about the school life in your university, especially the after-school activities, spare-time life and the tuition.
Thank you so much and Im looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Writing
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Everyone__has__a__person__he__wants__to__say__thank-you__to__in__his__deep__heart.I__owe__my__great__gratitude__to__my__mother.
My mother is a primary school teacher who graduated from a teachers college.She is a devoted mother as well as a kind and patient teacher.I was attended considerately by her every day,especially this year when I am in Senior Three.She often cooks delicious dishes for me and helps me clean up my room.Whats more,she even accompanies me deep into the night every time I am doing my homework.Most important of all,whenever I get upset or lose heart,she will comfort me and encourage me until I have cheered up.I appreciate her motto “Heaven will always leave a door open.As long as you work hard,you will definitely succeed.”
So now I spare no efforts in studying and focus all my attention on my lessons in order to be admitted into a famous university next year,so that I can reward my mother.
Writing 6
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Dear__students,
Last__weekend,our__class__went__on__an__interesting__camping__trip.All__the__way__we__enjoyed__the__beautiful__scenery__and__fresh__air.However,many of us didnt notice the bad effects on the environment due to our bad behavior.Some of us threw rubbish here and there,leaving words on famous buildings,picking flowers and speaking loudly in public,etc.
Firstly,what these students did is against the spirit of eco-travel.A true eco-travel is a journey which not only allows us to express our love for nature but also needs our responsibility.As we enjoy the beauty of nature we cant damage it.And all we should do is protect the environment and wildlife.
Only when we improve our awareness of eco-travel can our earth become more and more beautiful.After all,the earth is the only place for us to live on.
Best__wishes!
Yours,
Li__Hua
Writing 7
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As__a__tour__guide__of__an__international__travel__agency,I__find__it__so__embarrassing__to__see__many__Chinese__tourists__behave__badly__abroad.They speak loudly in public places,carve characters on tourist attractions,throw rubbish,spit everywhere,and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights.Such bad behavior overseas has caused great damage to the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.
Measures should be taken to stop this.First,before going abroad,tourists should be trained to obey social and public order,and respect local religions and customs.Besides,it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten days.Last,laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places.I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.
Writing 8
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Dear__John,
Im__very__glad__to__hear__that__you__will__come__to__my__city__for__short-term__language__training. In your letter,you mentioned the Tower Hotel.Here is some detailed information about it.
The Tower Hotel is located on Yuanda Road.Go through the gate of the entrance,and you will see the high building—Tower Hotel,in front of which lies a beautiful garden.Behind the building is a swimming pool,where you can go swimming for relaxing.Near the swimming pool stands a dining hall,where meals are served from 7:30 am to 9:00 am and between 5:30 pm and 8:00 pm.
As to accommodation fees,everyone should pay 200 yuan per day.If you need further information,please enquire at the reception desk on the ground floor when you arrive here.
Looking forward to seeing you very soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 9
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As the International Volunteer Day was coming, some volunteers of our school were organized to help the policemen with traffic control in our city. At 8 o’clock on the morning of last Sunday, we gathered at the school gate. One of our teachers was in charge of this activity and he divided us into four groups. Then we went to different crossings near our school. The police officers told us what we should do and how to protect ourselves from danger. We spent the whole morning keeping the streams of traffic flowing smoothly. With a red banner in our hands, we stopped some road users from running the red light. Some citizens praised us for our good deeds. Though we were very tired that morning, we were proud to have offered service to our society.
Writing 10
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Good__morning,__everyone!__It’s__my__honor__to__be__here__to__make__a__short__speech.
Recently I have found that some of our classmates can’t study effectively. Some can’t help falling asleep in class, because they often study too late into the night. Others seldom have sports, which surely does harm to their health.
As we know, enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students. We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep, so we should try to make wise use of our time,striking a balance between work and leisure. Besides, doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot, keeping fit, reducing stress and so on. Let’s spare some time to do all kinds of sports. And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
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